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1、ChapterThreeProducingEffectiveSentencesBase4:ConcisionPartIIBuildingGoodSentenceBase4:ConcisionUnderstandingConcision1.CuttingEmptyWordsandPhrases2.AvoidingUnnecessaryRepetition4.ChangingNegativesintoAffirmatives3.SimplifyingWordGroupsandSentencesUnderstandingConcision
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5、udentsunderstandingasoilpaintings,phonographrecords,piecesofsculpture,andguestlectureswhowereinvitedtospeaktotheclass.Onceheevensangasonginclassbeforethestudents’eyesinordertoillustrateaphilosophicalpoint.Second,IadmiredtheUnderstandingConcisionfactthathewouldconferwit
6、hstudentsatalmostanytimeoutsideoftheclassroomortalkwiththemonthetelephone.Drinkingcoffeeinthesnackbarafterhavingtaughtaclass,hewouldeasilymakefriendswithstudentswithgreatease.Sometimeshewouldissueachallengetoastudenttojoinwithhiminagameofchess.Atothertimes,hewouldquite
7、readilyjoingroupsofstudentstodiscusssubjectsrangingbroadlyfromastronomytoscubadiving.Manyyoungpeoplevisitedhimatonetimeoranotherinhisofficeforacademicadvice;otherscametohishomeforthepurposeofsocialevenings.Finally,Iwasfavorablyimpressedandattractedbyhislivelywit.Hebeli
8、evedUnderstandingConcisionthatnoclasshourisasuccessunless,duringit,thestudentsandtheprofessorhaveareasontojointighter
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