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专题四 学会使用复杂结构进行写作在现在的高考《考试说明》中，关于高考英语书面表达评分标准第五档(很好)中有这样一段话：“应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但是为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。”这就是说，学生仅运用基础的词汇和基本的句型，并不能体现出较强的语言运用能力，在这种情况下即使书面表达无语法错误，也不能得高分；相反在书面表达中有意识地使用复杂结构或较高级词汇，即使会出现一些错误，也不扣分，仍属于写作最高档。这是评分原则所体现的对考生的宽容态度，旨在鼓励考生在写作中有意识地尝试呈现几处高级语法结构，如省略句、强调句、倒装句、感叹句、虚拟句等。这样就能使短文出彩，让阅卷者心动，从而提高书面表达的分数。
1但要注意：使用复杂结构写作时，要把握好尺度，合理运用，切莫堆砌，避免矫揉造作、无病呻吟。一般来说，使用如下复杂结构能增强表达效果，提升短文评分档次。一、强调句。可对时间、地点、原因、方式等状语进行强调，以突出重点。对谓语动词也可通过增加助动词的形式来进行语意强调。二、倒装句。合理改变句子的正常语序，并使句子在意义、程度或语气上发生变化，从而体现修辞效果，以吸引读者的好奇心和注意力。三、感叹句。多用于文章的开头或结尾，能充分、生动地传达作者的思想感情，渲染文章的情感因素，活跃文章的气氛。四、省略句。能突出重点信息，缩小交流间隔，简化表达程序，简洁、明快、直接，穿透力强，从而增加语言表达效果。五、替代词。往往能使行文简洁流畅，避免重复啰嗦。
2六、进行时态。进行时态与always连用时往往表示说话人强烈的爱憎等感情色彩。七、被动句。有时候使用被动句更符合语意表达需要。八、否定句。许多时候否定句或双重否定句比肯定句更能体现写作者的观点和态度等，尤其在一些特定句型中。九、插入语。合理的使用可调整句子结构，能增加句式的灵活性，增强表达的准确性。十、虚拟语气。表达写作者的愿望、假设、怀疑、猜疑、建议等内心丰富情感，具有感染力。十一、比喻、拟人等修辞手法。修辞能给读者留下鲜活深刻的印象，具有强大的感染力，起到说理透彻、入木，说事生动、鲜活的作用。
3请阅读下面几组例句，试分析使用复杂结构或句型所能增强的表达效果。1.IntheeighteenthcenturyAlexanderPopewrotethefinestpoetryinEngland.(一般结构)IntheeighteenthcenturyitwasAlexanderPopewhowrotethefinestpoetryinEngland.(强调句)2.Wecansavetheearthonlybychangingthewaywelive.(一般结构)Onlybychangingthewaywelivecanwesavetheearth.(倒装句)3.Oceansareabletocleanthemselves,butcertainseasarenotabletocleanthemselves.(一般结构)Oceansareabletocleanthemselves,butcertainseasarenotabletodoso.(省略句)
44.Iamverygladtohearfromyouagain.(一般结构)Hownicetohearfromyouagain！(感叹句)5.Iquiteagreewithyou.(一般结构)Ican’tagreewithyoumore.(否定句)6.Thisisthebesthotelyoucanfindhere.(一般结构)Youcan’tfindabetterhotelhere.(否定句)Nowhereelsecanyoufindabetterhotel.(倒装句)
51.请使用不同的句式改写下列句子。①Ihopetohavemoretimetostudyinthepresentworkingcondition.感叹句：_________________________________________________虚拟句：_________________________________________________强调句(what句式)：________________________________________②Hedidn’trealizehisfoolishnessuntilhereturnedhome.强调句：_________________________________________________③Heisveryclever,butheworkswithoutmuchachievementbecauseofhislaziness.倒装句：_________________________________________________④Theworkwasveryappealingtome,butitwasveryboringtomyhusband.排比、省略句：___________________________________________⑤Thesinglemotherworksinthegardeneverydawn.拟人句：_________________________________________________
6Key：1.①感叹句：HowIhopetohavemoretimetostudyinthepresentworkingcondition!虚拟句：IfonlyIhadmoretimetostudyinthepresentworkingcondition.强调句：WhatIhopeistohavemoretimetostudyinthepresentworkingcondition.②强调句：Notuntilhereturnedhomedidherealizehisfoolishness./Itwasnotuntilhereturnedhomethatherealizedhisfoolishness.③倒装句：Cleverasheis,heworkswithoutmuchachievementbecauseofhislaziness.④排比、省略句：Tome,theworkingisappealing,buttomyhusbandveryboring.⑤拟人句：Everydawnseesthesinglemotherworkinginthegarden.
7⑥Theexcitedchildrenrushedintothehallafterbuildingthesnow-man,andtheirfaceswereredwithcold.with复合结构：________________________________________________独立结构：____________________________________________________⑦Hehadjustlosthiswaywhenitbegantorain,whichmadethematterworse.插入语：_____________________________________________________⑧Heloveshisdaughterverymuch.比喻句：_____________________________________________________⑨Manyofusallowourchildrentodojunkthings,includingeating,watching,listening,talkingandplayingetc.andthenwearesurprisedtoseethemgrowintohelplesscitizens.排比句：_____________________________________________________⑩Heheardasmoker’scoughwhenheturnedaroundthecorner.拟人句：_____________________________________________________
8Key：⑥with复合结构：Theexcitedchildrenrushedintothehallafterbuildingthesnow-manwithredfaces.独立结构：Theexcitedchildrenrushedintothehallafterbuildingthesnow-man,facesred.⑦插入语：Helosthisway.Tomakethematterworse,itbegantorain.⑧比喻句：Hisdaughteristheappleofhiseye.⑨排比句：Manyofusallowourchildrentoeatjunk,watchjunk,listentojunk,talkjunk,playwithjunk,andthenwearesurprisedwhentheyturnouttobesocialjunkies.⑩拟人句：Asmoker’scoughgreetedhisearswhenheturnedaroundthecorner.
92.请根据汉语提示，用复杂结构完成下列句子。①____________(疲劳又乏味),theyleftthecinemawhenthefilmstartedforonlyhalfanhour.②____________(不想把衣服撕破),thenaughtyboygaveupclimbingthetree.③Infact,hewasamanofwisdom,____________(尤其是一个富于想象力的人)．④_________________(在我看来),studentsinprimaryschoolshouldplacetheirsafety,healthaboveotherthings.⑤________________(不知不觉中),wehadtosaygoodbyetotheworkers,leavingmuchregretthere.Key:2.①Tiredandbored②Notwantingtoteartheclothes③especiallyamanfullofimagination④Itismyopinionthat/Inmyopinion⑤Beforeweknewit
10⑥____________(过去是操场的地方)nowstandsanothernewbuilding—ourlibrary.⑦____________(在体育活动方面花了25分钟),only12minutesgoesintohousework.⑧ButI’dliketoattendtheEnglishlectures,____________(我可以从中获得更多)informationonBritishandAmericancultures.⑨Itwould_______________(意义很大)tometolistentothetapeandlearn____________(内容是什么)inthetalk.⑩_________________(我突然想到)IcouldaskMr.ZhutolendmehismotorbikesothatIcouldgotovisitmyfriendatanyconvenienttime.Key：⑥Wheretheplaygroundusedtobe⑦While25minutesisspentonsports⑧fromwhichIcangetmore⑨meanagreatdeal;whatiscovered⑩Itoccurredtomethat
