中考英语写作讲评（一）.ppt

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1、Isshe?晕轮效应又称“光环效应”，属于心理学范畴，是指当认知者对一个人的某种特征形成好或坏的印象后，他还倾向于据此推论该人其他方面的特征。本质上是一种以偏概全的认知上的偏误。cleandirtymessyneatovermoderate123书写handwriting字数numberofwords格式formatstandardandcleanneatandclearnottoomanyortoofew1书写handwriting字母书写规范字母大小合适卷面布白均匀留白倾斜度一致2格式form

2、at假设你是李华，现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室（dormitory）规定，如不整理床铺，休息时间大声拨打电话，未经许可（permission）动用他人物品，离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯，做个文明室友，你决定写一封电子邮件给他。要求：（1）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；（2）字数：60-80词（信得开头和结尾已给出，不介入总词数）；（3）信中不得出现你的真实姓名，学校名和地名。参考词汇：respecteachother互相尊重therefore因此obe

3、ytherules遵守规定withoutpermission未经允许3字数numberofwordsDearWangMing,I’mwritingtokindlyremindyouofthedormitoryrules.Asweliveinthesameroom,wearelikefamiliesthusweshouldloveeachotherandrespecteachother.What’smore,weshouldmakeourroomcleanandtidy.Therefore,Ihop

4、eyoucanreadthefollowingrulesandobeythem.RuleNo.1Whenyougetupinthemorning,remembertomakethebed.RuleNo.2Don’tmakephonecallswhenwearesleeping.RuleNo.3Don’tuseothers’thingswithoutpermission.RuleNo.4Turnoffthelightsbeforeyouleavetheroom.Ihopeallofuscanobey

5、theserulesandmakeourroommoreandmorecomfortable.Bestwishes,LiHua85113I’mwritingtokindlyremindyouofthedormitoryrules.Asweliveinthesameroom,wearelikefamiliesthusweshouldloveeachotherandrespecteachother.What’smore,weshouldmakeourroomcleanandtidy.Therefore

6、,Ihopeyoucanreadthefollowingrulesandobeythem.RuleNo.1Whenyougetupinthemorning,remembertomakethebed.RuleNo.2Don’tmakephonecallswhenwearesleeping.RuleNo.3Don’tuseothers’thingswithoutpermission.RuleNo.4Turnoffthelightsbeforeyouleavetheroom.Ihopeallofusca

7、nobeytheserulesandmakeourroommoreandmorecomfortable.10行每行10个字；8行每行12个字123书写handwriting字数numberofwords格式format书写规范大小合适布白均匀不宜太多不宜太少10*10/8*12结构清楚三段式总分总“Outerbeauty”comesfirst!Ifanotheropportunityisgiven,oneofmycolleagueswillgiveapresentationonthe“innerb

8、eauty”.THANKS