资源描述：
《高考英语写作二-讲评.ppt》由会员上传分享，免费在线阅读，更多相关内容在教育资源-天天文库。
1、假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过你校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图，给他写一封回信介绍你校的变化。注意：1.回信须包括图画的主要内容2.可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯3.词数100左右。A.审题：（1）一封信（体裁）（2）谈学校的变化（三年前图1，三年后图2）（3）重点在三年后的描述B.题纲及常用结构1）开头语：收到来信hearfromsb./get（receive）yourletter…2）学校的变化：experience/witness/happen/takeplace新教学楼：anewschool
2、building图书馆：ournewlibrary新操场：thenewplayground树木环绕：lotsoftrees,surround,3）表述方位的词：ononeside（ontheotherside）ontheright（left）Therebe…,infrontof,inandaroundC.将以上要点扩展成句并连文，注意句与句之间的过渡。练习表示方位的词组ononesideoftheroadontheothersideinfrontoftheoutsidearoundtheschoolatthebackoftotheleftoftotherightof
3、havechangedhavetakenonanewlookhavetakenplacecanseegreatchangesusedtobetherewerebelocatedinlieinstandcansee练习表述内容的动词DearMr.SmithIwassopleasedtohearfromyouandIamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool.Youareright.Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplaceinourschoolduringthepastthreeyears.Ononesideof
4、theroadthereisanewteachingbuilding.Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuilding,ourlibrary.Initthereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazines.Theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandaroundtheschool.Ihopeyouwillcomeandseeforyourselfs
5、omeday.Bestwishes，Yours,LiHuaDearMr.Smith,I’mverygladtohavereceivedyourletter.Asyouknow,ourschoolhaschangedalottheseyears.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.Ifyoucometoourschool,youwillseethenewplaygroundandtherearemoretreesinsideandoutsidetheschoolthanbefore.Walkingthroughtheschoolgate,youc
6、anfindthenewlibrary,whichtakestheplaceoftheoldplaygroundonyourleft.Ontherightstandsanewteachingbuildingwith40classrooms.Inthefrontoftheschoolistheoldbuilding,butithasbeenequippedwithalotofmodernequipment.Ifyouhavetime,pleasecomeandseeit.Ithinkyou’llgetsurprisedatwhatyousee.Bestwishes,Y
7、ourfriend,LiHuaDearMr.Smith,Inyourletter,yousaidyouwereeagertoknowthenewappearanceofmyschool.NowIamgladtotellyouthegreatchangeshappeninginourschool.Firstandforemost,therearetwonewly-builtbuildingsstandingonbothsidesoftheschool,ofwhichonereplacestheoldplayground.Besides,whatexcitesusi
