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1、Reviewofthecomposition目前,有不少的中国人讲汉语时喜欢夹杂着英语.就此现象,你们班最近举行了一场辩论赛.请根据下表的提示,用英语客观的介绍一下辩论的结果.要求:1.可适当发挥,不要逐句翻译;2.补充自己的观点;3.字数:约100个单词.开头已经给出,不计入总词数’4.参考词汇:讽刺的---ridiculousNowadays,moreandmoreChinesepeoplecanuseEnglishintheirdailycommunication.…40%的同学认为:60%同学认为:你的观点:有点讽刺意义;对学
2、英语毫无作用喜欢这种方式;更有助于表达思想;优点基本都能完成了试题规定的任务．应用了语句的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，基本达到了预期的写作目的。.Itishelpful…/anditishelpful…,there1.标点的使用存在的问题Butontheotherhand,Therewerealso60%whothoughtoppositely.But60%ofthestudentsthoughtitisgoodforus,itishelpfulforustoexpresswhatwewanttosay.,some,because1.标
3、点的使用存在的问题Iagreethefirstone.Becausewhenwetalkwitheachother.SomeEnglishwordsareeasierthanChinese存在的问题2.语句缺乏相关性Thisismyopinion.Whataboutyou?Whatisyouidea?Manystudentstookpartinitandtheactivitywasheldsuccessfully.存在的问题2.语句缺乏相关性Andwealsoshouldreadmorebooks,Remembermorewords,
4、andlistentomoreEnglishsongssothatwecanspeakEnglishfluently.3.Chinglish存在的问题Italsomayletourculturedisappear.IthinkusingEnglishinourdailycommunicationwillmakeusdomoremistakesinEnglishexams.willmisleadusintheEnglishexams.Italsomayleadto/resultinthedisappearanceofourculture
5、.Theylikethisconvenientwaytoexpressthemselves.4.简单问题的复杂化Theylikethiswaywhichisconvenienttoexpressthemselves.5.语言表达的单一性问题thinkagreesayinsistsupportlikebelievebefondof6.语言的表达缺乏准确性AsfarasIconcernedIntheotherhand40percentofstudentssayEnglishBythisway7.层次结构问题8.时态、人称一致的问题9.文章
6、中心偏移优秀文章欣赏Nowadays,moreandmoreChinesepeoplecanuseEnglishintheirdailycommunication.Facingthisphenomenon,wehadadebate.About40%ofthestudentsthoughtitwasalittleridiculous,forwewereChineseandshouldbegoodatourmothertongue.ItwasnousecommunicatingwitheachotherinEnglishindailyli
7、feforEnglishstudy,theysaid.Buttheotherstudentsbelievedthatthiswaywouldbehelpfultoexpresstheirfeelings,sotheylikedtheway.Asforme,IagreeitisgoodforustoimproveourEnglish.Withmorepracticelikethat,wewon’tfeelshywhilecommunicatingwithforeigners.Inaword,itisawayworthtrying.优秀片
8、段(首段)Nowadays,moreandmoreChinesepeoplecanuseEnglishintheirdailycommunication.SomeofthemevenspeakChineseincombi
