高中英语写作讲评.ppt

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1、高中英语写作讲评Thecomputerismoreandmorewidelyused.Youngpeopleliketochatonline.Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcareabouttheirwriting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.Theycan’trememberthecharacters.Thegovernmenthascarriedoutanewpolicy.Itwillmakepeoplepayattent

2、iontoChinese.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Wedon’thavemuchtime.It’shightimethatwetookaction.Wecandevelopourcountrybyimprovingourmothertonguefirst.Howdoyougradeit（定档）?Andwhy?homeworkshowASSESSMENTstructureIsthearticledividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?Ifnot,comeupwithone.contentA

3、reallthedetailsstated?Ifnot,addthemissingdetails.Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Ifyes,correctthem.Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Ifyes,underlinethem.Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Ifyes,underlinethem.Let’simproveit:ASSESSMENTstructu

4、reIsthearticledividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?Ifnot,comeupwithone.Let’simproveit:contentAreallthedetailsstated?Ifnot,addthemissingdetails.Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?Let’simproveit:LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Ifyes,correctthem.Isthereanyadvancedvocab

5、ulary（高级词汇）?Ifyes,underlinethem.Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Ifyes,underlinethem.Let’simproveit:Summary:paragraphstopicsentencedetailstothepointadvancedvocabularysentencepatternslinkingwordsstructurecontentlanguagewritingfewmistakes目前，不少年轻人在写作中喜欢使用网络语言。某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你参考所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

6、有的同学认为：幽默；时尚；好玩有的同学认为：有错别字，不利于语文学习；有时难以理解你的看法：……Nowadays,manyteenagersliketousetheweblanguageintheirwriting.Somestudentsthinkitishumorousandcool.Theyusetheweblanguage.Theyfeelit’sfun.Somethinkitisdifficult.Theycannotunderstand.Whentheyarechattingonline,theydon’tcareabouttheirwriting.Therehavesome

7、wrongly-writtencharacters.ItisbadforChineselearning.Ithinkwecanusetheweblanguageandwecanexpressourselvesmorefreely.Improvethecomposition.Focusontopicsentences,advancedvocabulary&patternsandlinkingwords.Youcannotteacham