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1、高中英语写作讲评Thecomputerismoreandmorewidelyused.Youngpeopleliketochatonline.Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcareabouttheirwriting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.Theycan’trememberthecharacters.Thegovernmenthascarriedoutanewpolicy.I
2、twillmakepeoplepayattentiontoChinese.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Wedon’thavemuchtime.It’shightimethatwetookaction.Wecandevelopourcountrybyimprovingourmothertonguefirst.Howdoyougradeit(定档)?Andwhy?homeworkshowASSESSMENTstructureIsthearticledividedintoparts?Doeseachpar
3、thaveatopicsentence?Ifnot,comeupwithone.contentAreallthedetailsstated?Ifnot,addthemissingdetails.Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Ifyes,correctthem.Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary(高级词汇)?Ifyes,underlinethem.Arethereanygoods
4、entencepatterns(句式)?Ifyes,underlinethem.Let’simproveit:ASSESSMENTstructureIsthearticledividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?Ifnot,comeupwithone.Let’simproveit:contentAreallthedetailsstated?Ifnot,addthemissingdetails.Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?Let’simproveit:Langu
5、ageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Ifyes,correctthem.Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary(高级词汇)?Ifyes,underlinethem.Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns(句式)?Ifyes,underlinethem.Let’simproveit:Summary:paragraphstopicsentencedetailstothepointadvancedvocabularysentence
6、patternslinkingwordsstructurecontentlanguagewritingfewmistakes目前,不少年轻人在写作中喜欢使用网络语言。某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你参考所给要点,写一篇英语短文。有的同学认为:幽默;时尚;好玩有的同学认为:有错别字,不利于语文学习;有时难以理解你的看法:……Nowadays,manyteenagersliketousetheweblanguageintheirwriting.Somestudentsthinkitishumorousandcool.Theyuset
7、heweblanguage.Theyfeelit’sfun.Somethinkitisdifficult.Theycannotunderstand.Whentheyarechattingonline,theydon’tcareabouttheirwriting.Therehavesomewrongly-writtencharacters.ItisbadforChineselearning.Ithinkwecanusetheweblanguageandwecanexpressourselvesmorefreely.Improvethecomp
8、osition.Focusontopicsentences,advancedvocabulary&patternsandlinkingwords.Youcannotteacham