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1、写作导引【写作任务1】校英语杂志社有奖征文活动开始了,本期的主题是“Shouldstudentsdochores?”。假设你想参加这次活动,请写一篇不少于90词的短文。【任务分析】本次写作任务围绕“chores”展开,既要写出自己的观点,又要阐述理由。主体时态为一般现在时。写作的过程中,可以选用合适的关联词,如firstly,secondly等等。【思路点拨】引出话题→Ithinkstudentsshoulddochores... 具体说明理由→Firstly,it’sgoodfor...Secondl
2、y,doingchorescanhelp...Finally,studentsshouldhelp... 结尾(首尾呼应)→SoIthinkit’snecessaryforstudentstodochores.【范文展示】Shouldstudentsdochores?Ithinkstudentsshoulddochores.Herearemyreasons.Firstly,it’sgoodforstudentstodosomeeasychores.Theycan’tdependontheirparents
3、alltheirlives,sotheyshouldlearntodosomechores.Secondly,doingchorescanhelpstudentskeephealthyandstrong.Thenitisgoodfortheirstudies.Finally,studentsshouldhelptheirparentswithhousework.Parentsaretiredafteraday’swork,sotheywillbehappywhentheirchildrensay“Takearest,andletmeh
4、elpyou.”SoIthinkit’snecessaryforstudentstodochores.【写作任务2】假如你是李明,你最近很苦恼,原因是你的妈妈对你要求过于苛刻(要求你重复写作业,给你报名参加多个辅导班等),请你给你的英国笔友Mike写封信,倾诉自己的烦恼。不少于80词,可适当发挥。参考词汇:平衡 balance【思路点拨】该写作任务要求给笔友写一封倾诉信。写作时,除了应注意写信时需要注意的一些事项外,还应该有一个清晰的思路。该写作任务的整体写作思路可以分为三部分。引出文章主题→Ifeelalittleunhappyth
5、esedays.That’sbecauseof...⇩具体说明问题→Shemakesmedomyhomeworkoverandoveragain...⇩全文总结,提出自己的观点→Iknowmymomlovesme.But...【学生习作】DearMike,Ifeelalittleunhappythesedays.That’sbecauseofmymom.Ithinksheistoostrictwithme.Shemakesmedomyhomeworkoverandoveragain.What’smore,shesendsmetoman
6、yafter-schoolclasses,soIhavenotimeofmyown.Iknowmymomlovesme.ButIbelievethemostimportantthingformeistokeepabalancebetweenworkandplay.InthiswayIcanliveahappylife.Doyouthinkso? Yours, LiMing【习作点评】1. 本文观点明确,语句通顺,写出了一个面对诸多来自妈妈压力的中学生内心的苦恼。2. 文章在语气上有些生硬,个别表达有些笼统,可以通过增添内容或者改换表达
7、的方式使文章更生动。【习作改进】DearMike,Ifeelalittleunhappythesedays.That’sbecauseofmymom.Ithinksheistoostrictwithme.Shemakesmedomyhomeworkoverandoveragain.What’smore,shesendsmetomanyafter-schoolclasses.ThismakesmesadandIhardlyhaveanytimeofmyowntodosportsanddevelopmyhobbies.Iknowallsh
8、edidisjustforme.ButIdon’tthinkitisfairtogivemetoomuchpressure. AndIbelievethemostimportantthingformeistokeepab
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