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1、智课网GRE备考资料GRE官方写作题库33Asweacquiremoreknowledge,thingsdonotbecomemorecomprehensible,butmorecomplexandmysterious.范文Asknowledgeincreasesthroughobserving,analyzing,andunderstanding,thingsaroundusbecomelessmysteriousbutmorecomplex.Inthefollowingdiscussion,Iwouldliketopresentevidencetosupp
2、ortmyview.内容详细条目段落此段结构第一句开门见山地点出了作者对题目所谈问题的观点：通过观察、分析和理解增长的知识使我们身边的事物变得不那么神秘但更复杂了。第二句表明作者将在下文展开论述。此段功能立论段。针对题中所述，作者直接给出了自己的看法。因为题目围绕知识增多与世间万物的（1）神秘度/可理解度和（2）复杂度的关系。Themoreknowledgewehaveabouttheworldaroundus,thelessthingsbecomemysterious.Let’slookatthecaseofdiseases,forexample.Inanc
3、ienttimes,thepeopleregardeddiseasesasthepunishmentfromGod.Itisobviouslyabsurdformodernpeopletorecognizediseaseasapunishmentbutratheraresultofinfection.Modernpeopleunderstandthatpathogens,viruses,bacteria,orparasitesareresponsiblefordiseaseratherthansomesupernaturalstrengthbeyondours
4、copeofrecognition.Inunderstandingthis,peoplecanbetterrespondtodisease.However,themoreweknowaboutdisease,themorewerealizethatwedon’tknow.Thereisstillmuchworktodointhefieldofdiseaseresearch.内容详细条目段落此段结构总分结构。第一句话提出论点，告诉读者随着人对世间万物知识的增长，它们变得不如以前神秘了。接下来，以人对疾病的认识为例，表明人们了解的越多，疾病的神秘感越弱。本来它是“
5、神的惩罚”，但其实它是由病原体等很多微生物引起的现象。了解（知识增多）之后，人们对疾病得以更佳掌控了。此段功能论点一，围绕知识增多后事物的神秘度展开论述，关注的重点是万物变得不那么神秘了。Secondly,whenthingsarewellunderstood,relatedmattersaremoreeasilycomprehended.Let’slookagaintotheexampleofdisease.Intheolddays,awitchdoctorwithnomedicalknowledgeassumedtheresponsibilityofado
6、ctor.Whatthewitchdoctorwasabletodowasutterwords,playmusic,anddance.Thesebehaviorswereunrelatedtothematterofdisease.Comparedtothispreposteroustreatment,doctorsinmoderneraprescribedifferentpillstodifferentpatientsaccordanttotheirdistinctsymptomandthecauseofdisease,whichisextremelyunde
7、rstandabletoeveryone.Asaconsequence,itisclearthatwithanincreaseinknowledge,thingsbecomemorecomprehensiblethanbefore.内容详细条目段落此段结构总分结构。段首句表明相关事物随着知识增多变得更好理解了。作者再度以disease为例，在巫医横行的古代人们不明白疾病发生的原因。关于疾病的知识增长后，现代的医生可以对症下药，人们对疾病这一事物也更容易理解了。此段功能同样是论点一，围绕知识增多后事物的神秘度/可理解度展开论述，关注的重点是万物变得更可理解了。H
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