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1、CompletingtheStory--Tobepolished读后续写讲评课byShillingWhatarethemajorproblemsinyourwriting?Coherentsentence1衔接句Coherentsentence2coherentsentence3tInthislesson,studentsareableto1.developtheparagraphlogicallybasedontheoriginalstorybyfocusingoncoherentsentences2.learntopolishthewritingwithric

2、hlanguageFinalaimistogethighmarksclimax(高潮)endingbeginningdevelopment？“5W1H”Task1:RetelltheoriginalstorySomebody：Whoisthemaincharacter?Wanted:Whatdidthecharacterwant?But:Whatwastheproblem?So:Howdidthecharactertrytosolvetheproblem?Then:Whatdidthecharacterdo?Para1:Suddenlyhehadanidea.___

3、______________Para2:ThenextmorningJimhandedhispresenttohismom.__________________________________________________Whatwastheidea?？Underlinedwords:Mother'sDay,present,newspaper,advertisement,shoppingspree,thebestmother,hug,anenvelope,hisentry,hisprizeHowtomakehisentrythespecialpresenttohi

4、sbestmother?Task2:ClarifywhatwillbewrittenPara1:Suddenlyhehadanidea._________________Para2:ThenextmorningJimhandedhispresenttohismom.衔接句1S1:Hecopiedtheentryandgotanenvelope.--XXS2:Howaboutchangingcharactersandletmetakecareofmomasshedid.--叶S3:Itoccurredtohimthatheshouldputhisoriginalcom

5、petitionarticleasapresentonMother'sDay.--黄S4:Withoutasecondthoughtherantohisroom,takingoutapencilandthepaper.--蔡S5:“Whynotcopymyentrytomymom?”Jimthoughttohimself.Thenherushedintohisbedroom.--戴Task3:AssessthefirstcoherentsentenceS5:“Whynotcopymyentrytomymom?”Para1:Suddenlyhehadanidea.Pa

6、ra2:ThenextmorningJimhandedhispresenttohismom.衔接句1Sample:“Whynotcopymyentrytomymom?”Jimthoughttohimself.Thenherushedintohisbedroom...Tip：Logiccoherentsentencesmatter.Whataction(verbs)willbewrittennext?Para1:Suddenlyhehadanidea._________________Para2:ThenextmorningJimhandedhispresenttoh

7、ismom.Task4:Polishyourwritingwithrichlanguage衔接句1衔接句2Para1:Suddenlyhehadanidea._________________Para2:ThenextmorningJimhandedhispresenttohismom.Task4:PolishyourwritingwithrichlanguageHequicklyranintohisroomtofindhisoriginalentryandthatnewspaper.Thenhecopieditwithpencilsandcrayonsonab