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1、例1.Winnersdonotdedicatetheirlivestoaconceptofwhattheyimaginetheyshouldbe,rather,theyarethemselvesandassuchdonotusetheirenergyputtingonaperformance,maintainingpretenceandmanipulating(操纵)others.Theyareawarethatthereisadifferencebetweenbeinglovedandactinglov
2、ing,betweenbeingstupidandactingstupid,betweenbeingknowledgeableandactingknowledgeable.Winnersdonotneedtohidebehindamask.6.1斤斤于字比句次,措辞生硬例2.Solitudeisanexcellentlaboratoryinwhichtoobservetheextenttowhichmannersandhabitsareconditionedbyothers.Mytablemannersa
3、reatrocious(丑恶)—inthisrespectI'veslippedbackhundredsofyearsinfact,Ihavenomannerswhatsoever.IfIfeellikeit,Ieatwithmyfingers,oroutofacan,orstandingup—inotherwords,whicheveriseasiest.6.2结构松散,表达过于口语化例3.有一次,在拥挤的车厢门口,我听见一位男乘客客客气气地问他前面的一位女乘客:“您下车吗?”女乘客没理他。“您下车吗?
4、”他又问了一遍。女乘客还是没理他。他耐不住了,放大声问:“下车吗?”,那女乘客依然没反应。“你是聋子,还是哑巴?”他急了,捅了一下那女乘客,也引起了车厢里的人都往这里看。女乘客这时也急了,瞪起一双眼睛,回手给了男乘客一拳。(庄绎传,英汉翻译教程,1999:练习3) 译文1:Onceatthecrowdeddoorofthebus,Iheardamanpassengeraskedpolitelyawomanpassengerbeforehim:“Areyougettingoff?”Thewomanmade
5、noanswer.“Areyougettingoff?”themanaskedagain,butthewomansilldidn'tpayattentiontohim.Themancouldn'tbepoliteanylongerandaskedloudly,thewomanstillhadnoresponse.“Areyouadeaforadumb?”Hebecameupsetandgaveapushtothewoman,andalsoitattractedtheattentionofotherpass
6、engers.Atthistime,thewomanalsobecameupset,staredatthemanandgavehimbackafist.译文2:Onceatthecrowdeddoorwayinabus,Iheardamanaskedpolitelyawomanbeforehim:“Areyougettingoff?”Thewomanhadnoresponse.Hethenrepeateditbutinvain.Hegotimpatientandaskedlouder:“Gettingof
7、f?”butstillnoansweratall.Hebecameirritated,shouting:“Areyouadeaforadumb?”andgaveherapush,whichdrewotherpassengers'attention.Annoyed,thewomanglaredathimandhithimback(withherfist).例4.Bookspossessanessenceofimmortality.Theyarebyfarthemostlastingproductsofhum
8、aneffort.Templesandstatuesdecay,butbookssurvive.Timeisofnoaccountwithgreatthoughts,whicharefreshtodayaswhentheyfirstpassedthroughtheirauthor'sminds,agesago.Whatwasthensaidandthoughtstillspeakstousvividlyaseverfromth