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1、Left-behindChildren留守儿童审题（Analyzethetopic）主题Tense：Person：Framework：现在时：一般现在时、现在进行时第三和第一人称描述图片内容分析原因你的感受和愿望1、没有主题句或主题句不能概括本段主旨，少数同学甚至偏题。先思考题型及文章结构，决定用什么主题句，什么句型、什么动词词组表达，然后写在草稿纸上，改好无误后誊上试卷。2、描述部分不够概括，啰嗦且表达中式英语较多。要上升到现象3、语法、词汇错误：①主谓单复数不一致。②词性、名词可数不可数混搭。如：developthewesterneconomy经济n.stationery文具【U】phe
2、nomenon(单数)livehappier③词组现造情况和无谓语动词句子较多。4、乱点标点：如：Frommypointofview.Iamverysympatheticaboutthem.Problemsregion/areasmorehappilyphenomena（复数）,Para1:Asisshowninthepicture,severalchildrenarecrouchingtothegroundinacircle.(已给)Para2:Therearesomereasonsaccountingforthephenomenon.Para3:Personally,Ishowpityf
3、orthoseleft-behindchildren.Thelastkeysentence:Inaword,Ihopeeveryonewilllendahandtothemsothattheycanlivehappilyandhealthilyinthefuture.点题句Topicsentences2.①Therearemanyreasonswhichaccountforthephenomenon.②Manyreasonscanaccountforthephenomenon.③Thereasonsforthephenomenonareasfollows.3.①Afterlookingatt
4、hepicture,Ifeelverysad.②Honestlyspeaking,Ifeelsorryforthoseleft-behindchildren.Asisshowninthepicture,severalchildrenarecrouchingtothegroundinacircle.Theyarewritingdownwhattheywant.Asmostofthemarelivinginaless-developedwesternregioninChina,theyarebadlyinneedofstationery,dictionaries,schoolbags,TVset
5、sandsoon.Aboveall,theymisstheirparentsbadly.DescribethepictureReasons:1因果经济落后，教育也--；家庭贫困，目的父母外出打工去赚钱2.城市政策不利于打工者，没有平等的待遇，权利3.父母没有时间精力照顾孩子结果留在家中Thereareseveralreasonsaccountingforthephenomenon.Foronething,Lifeinthewesternregionisreallyveryhard.Inordertoearnmoremoney,parentshavetorushtobigcitiestodoo
6、ddjobs.Foranother,thesemigrantworkersareoftenunfairlytreatedinbigcitiesandthereforetheycan’taffordtotaketheirchildrenwiththem,thusleavingthembackathome.ExplainthereasonsPersonally,Ishowpityforthoseleft-behindchildren.Ifeelthateachchildhastherighttoreceiveagoodeducationandenjoyahappylifetogetherwith
7、theirparents.Ihopethateveryonewilllendahandtothem.Forexample,wecandonatesomemoneyorbookstothem.Wecanalsoraiseotherpeople’sawarenessofthosechildren’scurrentconditionsandinvitethemtohelpthem,too.Solet’stakeac
