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1、HowtoMakeAnError-findingandAnalysisReport[1]20世纪70年代末以来，中国坚持①深化改革②，扩大开放③，经济社会发展④取得了举世瞩目⑥的成就⑤。[2]2004年，中国进出口总额⑦达到1.15万亿美元⑧，居世界⑨第三位；吸收⑩外商投资额达到606亿美元⑾，居世界第二位⑿，累计吸收外商投资额⒀超过5600亿美元⑧。[3]同年⒁，中国国内生产总值达到1.65万亿美元⑧。[1]Sincethelate1970s,Chinahasbeenconstantly①drivingforthitsreforminitiati

2、ve②andexpandingthescopeofopening-up③andhasobtainedsubstantialachievements⑤insocioeconomicdevelopment④whichhasbeencenteroftheworld’sattention⑥.[2]In2004,China’simportsandexports⑦totaledUSD1.15trillion⑧,ranking3rdamongallnations⑨intheworld,anditattracted⑩USD60.6millioninforeigni

3、nvestment⑾,thesecondhighestamountworldwide⑿,bringingtheaggregatevalueofinwardforeigninvestment⒀tooverUSD560billion⑧.[3]In2004⒁,China’sGDPamountedtoUSD1.65trillion⑧.OriginaltranslationOriginalversion：[1]Sincethelate1970s,Chinahasbeenconstantly①drivingforthitsreforminitiative②an

4、dexpandingthescopeofopening-up③andhasobtainedsubstantialachievements⑤insocioeconomicdevelopment④whichhasbeencenteroftheworld’sattention⑥.[1]20世纪70年代末以来，中国坚持①深化改革②，扩大开放③，经济社会发展④取得了举世瞩目⑥的成就⑤。Errorfindingandanalysis1Errorfindingandanalysis1坚持——hasbeenconstantlyhasconsistentlycons

5、tantly:Youuse“constant”todescribesomethingthathappensallthetimeorisalwaysthere.=continualThedirectionofthewindisconstantlychanging.(CollinsCobuildEnglishDictionary,2000.)Consistent:1)alwayskeepingthesamepatternorstyle,unchanging.Youarenotconsistent,firstyoucondemnme,thenyoupra

6、iseme.2)inagreementwithsthconsistently(OxfordadvancedLearner’sEnglish–ChineseDictionary)2.深化改革——drivingforthitsreforminitiativedriveforth(X)Initiative:[plan][C]animportantnewplanorprocessthathasbeenstartedinordertoachieveaparticularaimortosolveaparticularproblem.Agovernmentini

7、tiativetohelpexporters.(LongmanDictionaryofContemporaryEnglish)3.扩大开放—expandthescopeofopening-updeepenedreformandopenedwidertotheoutsideworld4.取得了举世瞩目的成就——hasobtainedsubstantialachievementsobtain----makesubstantial—remarkableOfconsiderableimportance,sizeorworth.很重要的，很可观的，大量的，很

8、有价值的。AsubstantialamountofcashConcerningtheessentialsofsth.基本的