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1、大学英语作文错误分析19.TheQualitiesoftheTeacherPmastudentinaNormalUniversity.(1)F11becomeateacherinthefuture.Buttherearesomenecessaryqualitiestobeateacher(2)・Firstly,youmustloveyourcaree匚BecauseifyoudorfIhaveinterestinteachingstudents,you'llhavenomotivateandenthusiastic(3)todoit
2、.Youwillalwayscomplainyourwork(4)“ndgettiredofit・Secondly,youshouldbecapableofgreatDatience(5)・Thisislargelyamatterofself-training.Itmakesgreatdemandsonnervousenergytoteachstudents.(6)Wemusthavepatiencewithstudentswhentheymakemistakes.Finally,teachersshouldcommunicatew
3、ithstudentsconstantly.Withoutcommunicationwitheachother,wecan^tunderstandwhatthey(7)arethinking(8)andhowwecanhelpthemcatchupwithgood-study(9)studentsorgetout(10)theshadow.Asforme,Flltrymybesttoteachstudentsandtobeagoodteache匚点评：本文整体结构清晰，前后连贯，表达思想清楚。但存在一些细节问题，如1.单词大小写错误
4、(划线1：在这句话中，nonnal和university不是专有名词，不应该大写)。2.单词词性使用错误(划线3:no后面应该接名词,而motivate和enthusiastic分别为动词和形容词，应该改为motivation,enthusiasm)<>3.中式英语错误。受到汉语思维的影响，本文出现多处中式英语。(划线2:"tobeateacher"的主语应该是人，不能用therebe结构,此句应改为ButIknowoneneedssomenecessaryqualitiestobecomeateacher；划线5：应该是"具有”耐
5、心，不是“会”耐心，故应改为havegreatpatience;划线9：成绩好的学生，直接说goodstudents即可;另外划线6也是中式英语，表达不地道)4.搭配错误(划线4：complain是不及物动词，只有先接介词about后才能接宾语；划线&thinking后而也应该接介词about;划线10：固定搭配getoutof,意为"走出…”，介词of不能省略)5.代词使用错误(划线7:they指向不明确，应该改为thepoor-performingstudents)(点评老师：张继光)20.ShouldPrivateCarsBe
6、EncouragedinChina?Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmorepeoplehaveprivatecar(1).Inourcountry一China,adevelopingcountry,therearealsomoreandmorepeoplehavetheirowncar(21_(3)causesanargumentamongpeople・Somepeoplethinkitisgoodthatsomanypeoplehaveprivatecar.Itindicatesthatpe
7、ople'slivingconditionisraising(4).Chinaisdevelopingquickly.Moreover,peoplewhohaveprivatecarwillbeconvenient.Buttherearealsomanypeopleareagainstthatmoreandmorepeoplehaveprivatecar(5).Becauseitwillcausemoreseriousenvironmentpollution,especially、Chinaisadevelopingcountry(
8、6).EnvironmentalpollutionwillinfluenceChina^sdevelopment.Inmyopinion,Ithinkit'sagoodappearance(7).Timesisadvancing,me
