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1、汉英翻译症（三）ParallelStructureIntroduction在将若干成分并列叙述时，既要照顾到它们语法形式的对等（如词性、语法成分、主动/被动等），也要照顾到抽象/具体性质的对等。校训翻译DeadPoetsocity:WellingtonSchoolTradition,honor,discipline,excellence华中科技大学校训:明德 厚学求是 创新Virtue,Knowledge,Truth,Innovation原来东九楼的译文是Illustrious Virtue, Erudite,Practical, Innovation西点军校Duty,Hono
2、r,Country耶鲁大学TruthandLight香港大学“格物明德”KnowledgeandVirtueExamples1、需要木材用以建房、防洪。误译：Timberisneededforconstructionandtowithstandfloods.改译：Timberisneededtoprovidematerialforconstructionandtohelpwithstandfloods.Examples2、代表们一致认为这是以后十年的重要问题，关系着提高人民的生活，和保护环境。误译：Thedelegatesagreedthatthesearevitalissue
3、sforthenextdecade,bothforpeople’squalityoflifeandforsavingtheenvironment.改译：Thedelegatesagreedthatthesearevitalissuesforthenextdecade,affectingboththequalityofpeople’slivesandthepreservationoftheenvironment.Examples3、他们一致建议，应该将更多资金用于发展科技，引进更加灵活的制度以保证经济领域和科研机构的人才流动，进一步努力以保证科研成果转化为工农业生产。误译：The
4、yunanimouslysuggestedthatmorefundsshouldbeinjectedintoscientificdevelopment,thatamoreflexiblesystembeintroducedtohelpthetransferoftalentbetweeneconomicsectorsandscientificinstitutes,andthatmoreeffortsareneededtoacceleratethetransferofthefruitofscientificresearchintoindustrialandagriculturalp
5、roduction.Examples改译：Theunanimouslysuggestedthatmorefundsshouldbeallocatedforscientificdevelopment,thatamoreflexiblesystemshouldbeintroducedtofacilitatetheexchangeofhighlytrainedpeoplebetweeneconomicenterprisesandscientificinstitutes,andthatmoreeffortsshouldbemadetoensurethattheresultsofscie
6、ntificresearcharerapidlyappliedinindustryandagriculture.Examples4、因为我们控制的国土面积扩大，大量的银行钞票在乡村发行，农产品增加，以及工商业复苏，从7月底开始，货币流通量增加了。误译：SincetheendofJulytheamountofmoneyincirculationhasincreased,owingtofactorssuchastheexpansionoftheterritoryunderourcontrol,thediversionofmorebanknotestothecountryside,i
7、ncreasedfarmproduceandtherecoveryofindustryandcommerce.Examples改译：SincetheendofJulytheamountofmoneyincirculationhasincreased,owingtosuchfactorsastheexpansionoftheterritoryunderourcontrol,thediversionofmorebanknotestothecountryside,anincreaseinfarmp
