2023年写作笔记

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6Travellingdomesticallyismoreconvenient.Un1ikeforeignones,domestictourdoesnotentai1ge11ingavisa,exchangingcurrency,1earnningaforeignlanguage.Doyouprefertoinvitemanypeopleandho1dabigpartyortoinviteclosefriendsandfamilymembersfbrasmallparty?Thehostdoesnothavetoworryaboutsendingoutinvitation,attendingtoguestsandcleaningupafterwards.H--Hea1thandsafetyᏉabcᐰeᏉa:physicalandpsychologicalhealth/fitness/conditions/wellbeingfgᓻiimpose/exertdangeronsth/negativeeffectsonsth.Teenagerobesityjkshortsight,insomniaᜫḨndepressionᢓpWbeteased/belaughedatFee1oneselfinferior,beself-abasedSchoolsareno1ongernecessarybecausestudentscangetenoughinformationathomeusingcomputers.SoreshoulderandneckpainAccidentsncrimespoliticalturmoil----rstuInjureyourkneesandank1esFracturevᢚget1ostE——Environmentx᛻1,eco-friend1yproducts
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7environment,contributingtosustainabledevelopment.ᙠᓫ$☢a+ᓫ$⊤᝞attainattendappntcess--——8᝞success2,ᐰᳫᨨGreenhousegasemission-*globa1warmingemitFactors:1)exhaustfrommotorvehic1es2)burningoffossi1fuels3)Deforestation----᪍loggingᩈEffects:1)riseinsealeve12)c1imatechange3)desertification4)extinctionofmanyspecies/reducediversityofecosystem3.ᜧurbansmog¡smi1encebromaneeOPᵨᙠ£ᦻEndangersourhealth,1eadingtorespiratorydiseases,suchasasthma.¥ᗞM-------moneyImposefinancia1burdenon

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9ᓝᜧµ¶Persistence·ᢝPersistenceisthetwinsisterofexcel1ence.Diligence¹ºDiligenceisthematterofgoodluck.---------------BenjaminFranklinOptimism»1Optimismisthecontextofsma11meninhighplace.Disciplineself-discipline¼½Disciplineisᵫebridgeofgoa1sandaccomplishment.Tolerance¿)Toleranceisthehighestresu1tofeducation—------He1enKei1erZero-to1erancepolicyÀ)Ár/InnovationÂÃInnovationdistinguishesaleaderandafollower———SteveJobsModestyÄBTheindicatebalancebetweenmodestyandconceitispopularity.TeamworkÅÆᔠ£Ta1entwinsgames,butteamworkwinschampionship.———-MichaelJordonCourageÇLifeshrinkingorexpandingdependsonyourcourage.IndependenceÈÉSuccesshingesonknow1edge,experienceandsocialcircles.T———technologyÊᢈ1,Informationtechnology

10Accesstoinformationregardingtotheknowledgeofanyhumanarea.Contactpeopleonagloba1scale.BaiduGoogle,Wikipediaonlinelibrary.Facebook,Twitter,Facetime,Skype,Renren,Weibo,Wechat,Ins2,CommunicationtechnologySmart-phonevideo-chattingtexting,emai1MSN,What'sappWriteLetterLand-linephone3,IndustrialAutomationLow-skill,precise4,TransportationtechnologyModerntransportationsystemLessexhaustingtoworkSavetimeoftravelingᦻÌÍ᪀4/5/6ÏÐ;ÑÒÓ5ÏÔᜮÍÖᔜÏW×ØÈÉᡂÏÙÚ¬ÏÔᜮÍÖ¬ÛᑣÛᑣ1ÔᜮÍÖÝÞᓄWÙÚÏà©ᓄ஺Ûᑣ2:ÔᜮÍÖáâQãWÙÚÏàä὏æ£஺Ûᑣ3ÔᜮÍÖçèéê,ÙÚÏàìᡷî⚪஺

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12E.g:Universityfeesinmanycountriescanbequiteexpensivenowadays,andthismayleadsometobe1ievethateducationisbecoming1essobtainab1ethanbefore.Thisisuntrue,however.Ifwe1ookatthebiggerpicture,itisactuallyeasierformostpeop1etogelaneducationintoday'ssocietycomparedtointhepast.E.g.:studyingingroupsisbetterthanstudyinga1one.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofmoderneducationhasbeenagrowingappreciationoftheindispensabilityof1earningmethodstotheentiresocialbeings.Agreatnumberofpeopledeemthatstudyingallbyoneselfisbeneficialtohumanbeings,describingitasaneffectivewaytocultivateindependentIhinking.Accordingtomypreference,studyingwitheachotherpeopleissuperiortostudyingalone.E.g.:Youngpeopleshouldtakeseveraljobsbeforetheydecidealong-termcareer.Coincidentwiththeadvancement/development/progressofmodernsocietyhasbeenagrowingappreciationofcareerselectiontothecandidatesinjobmarket.Agreatnumberofpeop1edeemthattakingsevera1jobsatfirstisbeneficialtoyoungpeopie,describingitasanexce11entwaytoaddingtheirexperience,enlargingtheirrelationshipPeoplearehavingdifferentopinionsaboutwhetherAorB.Peopiearehavingconflicting

13Whenitcomestotherelationshipbetweenpossessionsandhappiness,theopinionsofpeoplefromdifferentbackgroundandexperiencevary.Somemayclaimthat......,whereasotherpeopledeemthat.........Frommyperspective........Whenitcomestothe1eamingmethods,theopinionsofpeoplefromdifferentbackgroundandexperiencevary.Somepeoplemayholdthat,comparedtostudyingwithotherpeopie,studyingaloneisamoreeffectivewaytocuItivateindependentthinking.However,Iviewthequestionfromtheoppositeperspectiveforthefoilowingreasons./andthatisexactlyhowIviewit.3.?@A⚪Whichonedofewerpossessionscomea1ongwith,morehappinessCᑏ1,DEᐰᦻGᧇIJ᪗L@ᩭ,2,ᡷ@ᧇPᐙ3,CᑏRS/T1,U>⚪2,UVWXYZ[⌕W1,]ᵭthesis_ᦋᑏ`2,6ᑮbc
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191.TopicSentence(A~*B)2.Exp1anationCA->C)3.Explanation(C-*B)4.Example.(ᱥýឋ:þÿ,ឋ᪷⚪ᩭ:)5.Exampie(⌕ᨵ⁚⁚⁚!)6.Example("#$⌕%ᔠ⚪Ḅ())7.,-./(Tomysurprise,whenI)012sharemyownstorywithtruthfulfriends,theyhaveshocking1ysimilarexperience.)Inreality,similarmeasuresarebeingtakenbymanyothermajorcitiesaroundthewor1d,whichfurtherjustifiesitseffectiveness.Nowadays,morepreferentia1poIiciesarebeingformedandimp1emented,whichfurthertestifiestothepowerfuIroleofthegovernmentintheeconomicdevelopment.,32,324526789:;$$ᑡ=:3$--?9⁚-$$-@9":(AB:;)CDE᝱GHᡃJḄ᪗L4:$ᑗḆO=PᡠRS=஺UᜧCDW1.X■Pᦔ⁚2.A3/1\013.CSROḕᶍ

201.Topicsentence2.Example_Gᱥaឋᡈ:ឋcdeᐵgh᪷⚪ijk3.Example_lmk4.Examp1e_⌕ᨵ⁚⁚,⁚X■P⁚k5.Exampie_"#%ᔠ⚪()k6.A☢.:_opLqᎷ᝞R…Ḅu,…vRw…kᦪyAccordingtoarecentresearch,thereare4000000peopiedyingfromthediseasesre1atedtosmoking.Accordingtoasurveyregardinghumanphysica1conditions,conductedbyWor]dHealthOrganization
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BᙠM☢%᝞AḄA/DHighschoo1studentsshou1dtakepart-timejobsduringsummerbreak.AccumulateexperienceEnlargesocialcirclesEarnmoneyuniversitytuitionPractice:Highschoo1studentsshouIdtakepart-timejobsduringsummerbreakisbetterthanjusttakearelax.Takingpart-timejobsisbeneficialforstudentsbothinaddingexperienceandmakingnewfriends.Whenstudentsfacetoa11ranksofpeopie,morechallengetheyneedtohand1e,whichtheycannevergetfromjusthavingre1ax.Moreover,studentswillhaveamorep1atformtomakenewfriends,maybewhohavegradua

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