2022-2023学年高一英语必修一单元精练Unit 1单元话题满分范文必背（外研版2019）

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Unit1单元话题满分范文必背(名校最新真题)1．假如你叫李华，新学期开学两个月了，你的英语老师要求你在英语课堂上用英语和同学们交流一下你到新学校后的感受。交流内容要求包括以下要点：1、校园环境和教学设施；2、师生给你的印象；3、给学校的两点建议。注意：1、词数100词左右；2、信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数；3、内容可适当发挥，要注意行文连贯。Hello,everyone,I’mhonoredtostandheretotellyousomethingaboutmyschoollifeinthepasttwomonths………….【答案】Onepossibleversion:Hello,everyone,I’mhonoredtostandheretotellyousomethingaboutmyschoollifeinthepasttwomonths.Ourschoolisverybeautifulwithawoodygarden,wherewecantakeawalk,breathingthefreshairandenjoyingthepleasantscenery.Theadvancedequipmentintheclassroomisjustbrilliantandithelpsourteachersmaketheirclasseslivelyandinteresting.MyclassmatesaresoexcellentanddiligentthatIhavetoworkextremelyhardtokeepupwiththem.Fortunately,myteachersandclassmatesareallfriendlyandenthusiastic.Ihavealreadymadeseveralnewfriendshere.However,thefoodinthecafeteriaisverypoorandIhopeitcangetimproved.Besides,weareextremelybusydoinghomeworkeveryday.HowIwishwecouldhavemoretimeforphysicalexercise!Thankyou!【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你叫李华，新学期开学两个月了，你的英语老师要求你在英语课堂上用英语和同学们交流一下你到新学校后的感受。交流内容要求包括以下要点：1、校园环境和教学设施；2、师生给你的印象；3、给学校的两点建议。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，校园环境和教学设施；第二段，师生给你的印象；给学校的两点建议。第三段，表示感谢。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:awoodygarden，takeawalk，breathingthefreshairandenjoyingthepleasantscenery，advancedequipment,   keepupwith,friendlyandenthusiastic,getimproved，physicalexercise。第四步：确定较为高级的句子:Ourschoolisverybeautifulwithawoodygarden,wherewecantakeawalk,breathingthefreshairandenjoyingthepleasantscenery.MyclassmatesaresoexcellentanddiligentthatIhave学科网（北京）股份有限公司

1toworkextremelyhardtokeepupwiththem。第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Fortunately，However,Besides。第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:where引导的定语从句Ourschoolisverybeautifulwithawoodygarden,wherewecantakeawalk,breathingthefreshairandenjoyingthepleasantscenery.so…that引导的结果状语从句MyclassmatesaresoexcellentanddiligentthatIhavetoworkextremelyhardtokeepupwiththem。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。2．假设你是李华，你的好友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1.学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；2.多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；3.积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。注意：1.词数：100左右；     2.可适当增加细节。提示词：   adaptto     适应___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSusan，I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroubleadaptingtoyournewschoollifeinAmerica,butthissituationcanbeeasilychangedifyoutakemyadvice.First,youshouldworkhardatEnglish,whichcangiveyoumoreopportunitiestocommunicatewithothers.Secondly,whynotmakesomefriends?Theycanhelpyoutoforgetyourloneliness.Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideaifyoutakeanactivepartinallkindsofactivities,whichwillhelptomakelifemoreinteresting.Bydoingso,youwillbehappierwithyournewlifesoon.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours，LiHua【解析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，你的好友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。给她回复邮件提出建议。全文以一般现在时和二三人称为主。学科网（北京）股份有限公司

2【详解】第1步：审题。根据提示可知全文是一封电子邮件，给Susan回邮件提出适应新生活的具体建议。全文以一般现在时和二三人称为主。第2步：组织要点。1.学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；2.多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；3.积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词。adaptto，takeone’sadvice，communicatewithother，、makesomefriends，takeanactivepartinallkindsofactivities。写作时注意邮件的格式和惯用语。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如havingtrouble(in)doingsth、communicatewithother、forgetyourloneliness等等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如定语从句……whichwillhelptomakelifemoreinteresting.同时文章的一些串联成分，如firstofall、secondly、thirdly等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。3．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友John对刚进入的高中生活不太适应，请你写信告诉他你的想法，内容要点如下：1.鼓励其广交朋友；2.积极参加体育活动，强身健体；3.努力奋斗进入理想大学。注意：1.可加入一些细节，使文章更加通顺合理；2.词数100左右（信的格式已给出，不计入总词数）。DearJohn,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJohn,I’msopleasedtohearthatyou’vebeeninSeniorHighSchool.Andmaybeyouneedacoupleofmonthstoadjustyourself.Herearesomegoodtipsforyou.Firstly,alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun,sowhynotmakealotofgoodfriendsandenjoyhelpingeachother.Secondly,wecantakeanactivepartinsportsinoursparetimesothatwecangetintoshape,whichwillsurelybegoodforourfurtherstudy.Besides,it’sourdutytostudyhardtomakesurethatonedayourdreamofenteringakeyuniversitywillcometrue.学科网（北京）股份有限公司

3Ibelieveyou’llgetusedtoitsoonandwaitforyourgoodnews.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给对刚进入高中生活不太适应的美国笔友John提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：firstly→firstofall一定：surely→certainly此外：besides→what’smore习惯于：getusedto→beaccustomedto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun,sowhynotmakealotofgoodfriendsandenjoyhelpingeachother.拓展句：Firstly,alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun,sowhynotmakealotofgoodfriendsandenjoyhelpingeachother,whichwillmakeyouhappy.【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly,wecantakeanactivepartinsportsinoursparetimesothatwecangetintoshape,whichwillsurelybegoodforourfurtherstudy.(运用了sothat引导的目的状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Besides,it’sourdutytostudyhardtomakesurethatonedayourdreamofenteringakeyuniversitywillcometrue.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)4．假定你是李华，你的外国好友Eric将作为交换生到你市的一所高中学习。因担心自己不能快速适应这里的学校生活，特写信向你求助，请就此给他写封回信。要点如下：1．乐意提供帮助；     2．提出具体建议；     3．希望能够帮到对方。注意：1．词数100左右；     2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．信的开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearEric，Ifeeldelightedtolearnthatyouarecomingtostudyinourcityasanexchangestudent.学科网（北京）股份有限公司

4______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua【答案】DearEric,Ifeeldelightedtolearnthatyouarecomingtostudyinourcityasanexchangestudent.Asforhowtoadjustyourselftothenewschoollifeherequickly,I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.First,Irecommendthatyoulearntheschool’srulesbyreadingitshandbookfirst.Ifpossible,youmayaswellvisittheschoolinadvance,sothatyouwillknowtheschoolbetter.Besides,it’squitenecessarytocommunicatewithyourclassmatesandschoolmates,whichenablesyoutomakemorenewfriends.What’smore,participatinginafter-classactivitiescanbeofgreathelptoo！Bydoingthis,notonlycanyouimproveyourselfbutyouwillgetyourselfinvolvedinthegroupquickly.Ihopeyouwillfindthesuggestionspracticalanddon’thesitatetoturntomeanytimeyouneedhelp.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本文为提纲式作文，内容为回复求助信，提出建议。【详解】首先确定文章的主要要点，确定文章的时态为一般现在时，人称可用第二人称。文章可分三段：首先表达对Eric的欢迎和乐意提供帮助；然后提出具体建议；最后希望能够帮到对方。写作时要注意态度诚恳，要点全面，表达正确，条理清晰。【点睛】本文运用了较多从句，如：宾语从句Irecommendthatyoulearntheschool’srulesbyreadingitshandbookfirst.状语从句：Ifpossible,youmayaswellvisittheschoolinadvance,sothatyouwillknowtheschoolbetter.it作形式主语的主语从句it’squitenecessarytocommunicatewithyourclassmatesandschoolmates,中。定语从句whichenablesyoutomakemorenewfriends.倒装句notonlycanyouimproveyourself.此外，文章注意各层次之间的衔接：first，besides，what’smore，使文章很有条理。5．假定你是高一学生李华，你叔叔家的弟弟小明也是一名高一学生，但是他觉得不太适应高一的学习生活，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.与老师交流，征求老师意见；2.上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记：3.其它方面。注意：1.词数100左右；学科网（北京）股份有限公司

52.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJim,I’mdelightedtohearfromyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’mdelightedtohearfromyou.Now，I’dliketosharemystudytipswithyou.First,you’dbettercommunicatewithyourteachersoften.Inthisway,theymayoffersomegreatadviceonbothyourstudyandlife.Second,whynotmakeyourselfactiveineachclass,listentotheteacherattentivelyandtakenotescarefullysothatyoucanreviewlater?Third,itsagoodideatodoyourhomeworkontimesoonafterschool,whichwillhelpyoupracticewhatyouhavelearnedandmakeitfreshinyourmind.Isincerelyhopemyadvicecanbehelpfultoyouandthatyoucanenjoyyournewschoollife.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.与老师交流，征求老师意见；2.上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记：3.其它方面。第二，人称为第一、二、三人称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主，兼用一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，引题。第二段，1.与老师交流，征求老师意见；2.上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记：3.其它方面。第三段，希望自己的建议对Jim有所帮助。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:offer,attentively,carefully,practice,enjoy,bedelightedtodosth,hearfrom,sharesthwithsb,communicatewith,makeyourselfactive,listentotheteacher,takenotes,takeitfreshinyourmind,behelpfultosb.第四步：确定较为高级的句子:sothat引导的目的状语从句Second,whynotmakeyourselfactiveineachclass,listentotheteacherattentivelyandtakenotescarefullysothatyoucanreviewlater?Which引导的非限制性定语从句Third,itsagoodideatodoyourhomeworkontimesoonafterschool,whichwillhelpyoupracticewhatyouhavelearnedandmakeitfreshinyourmind.that引导的宾语从句Isincerelyhopemyadvicecanbehelpfultoyouandthatyoucanenjoyyournewschoollife.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:First,Second,Third.学科网（北京）股份有限公司

6第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:如sothat引导的目的状语从句Second,whynotmakeyourselfactiveineachclass,listentotheteacherattentivelyandtakenotescarefullysothatyoucanreviewlater?Which引导的非限制性定语从句Third,itsagoodideatodoyourhomeworkontimesoonafterschool,whichwillhelpyoupracticewhatyouhavelearnedandmakeitfreshinyourmind.that引导的宾语从句Isincerelyhopemyadvicecanbehelpfultoyouandthatyoucanenjoyyournewschoollife.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。6．假设你是李华，你收到朋友李磊的信，他告诉你他不适应高一数学老师讲的课，在学习数学方面有些困难，以至于跟不上其他同学，因此他感到非常着急。请你给李磊写一封信，想办法帮助他解决这方面的困难。参考词汇：适应adaptto要求：1.不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearLiLei,Ihavegotyourletter.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearLiLei,Ihavegotyourletter.AndIamverygladthatyoubelieveme.IhaveknownyouhavesomedifficultyinlearningMathsbecausecan’tadapttowhatyourmathsteacherteaches.Don’tworryaboutit.Ithinkthefollowingmaybeofhelptoyou.Firstly,you’dbetterlistentotheteachercarefullyinclassandpractisemore.YoucanaskyourMathsteachertoexplainwhatyoucan’tunderstandafterclass.Youshouldbeconfidentandbelieveinyourself.Ithinkyoucanmakeit.Finally,youcancommunicatewithyourclassmatesandgetsomeadviceonMaths.Best   wishes!Yours,LiHua【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求用英语写一封回信。【详解】学科网（北京）股份有限公司

7要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如：havesomedifficultyindoingsth.做某事有困难，adaptto适应。还使用了宾语从句AndIamverygladthatyoubelieveinme.和宾语从句.Ithinkyouwilladapttoitanddowellinitinfuture.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。7．很多学生进入高中以来，因饮食不规律，导致了一系列健康问题，你校英文校刊饮食栏目针对这一问题，向全体同学征稿，请你以“BeaSmartEater”为题目，为该栏目投稿，主要内容如下：1.健康饮食的重要性；2.如何做到健康饮食；3.向同学们发出呼吁。注意：1.词数80左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。BeaSmartEater_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asahighschoolstudent,Inoticedthatmanystudentshadaseriesofhealthproblemsbecauseofirregulardiet.NowI’dliketocallonyoutobeasmarteater.Forusstudents,eatinghealthyfoodisofgreatimportancebecauseweneedenoughnutrientstokeepourbodyfunctioningwell.Havingmealsregularlyisagoodwaytokeepfitandpreventdiseases.Besides,weshouldeatlessjunkfood.Byeatingjunkfood,wemaygetsickeasily.   Let'schangeourwayofliving.Let'shaveahealthydietfromnowon.Byhavingmealsregularly,wewillgrowuphealthilyandhappily.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“BeaSmartEater”为题目，给校英文校刊饮食栏目投稿，呼吁高中生健康饮食。【详解】1.词汇积累重要的：isofgreatimportance→beimportance学科网（北京）股份有限公司

8保持健康：keepfit→keephealthy由于：becauseof→dueto呼吁：callon→   appeal2.句式拓展简单句变复杂句原句：Besides,weshouldeatlessjunkfood.拓展句：Besides,weshouldeatlessjunkfoodwhichisharmfultous.【点睛】[高分句型1]Forusstudents,eatinghealthyfoodisofgreatimportancebecauseweneedenoughnutrientstokeepourbodyfunctioningwell.（由because引导了原因状语从句）[高分句型2]Havingmealsregularlyisagoodwaytokeepfitandpreventdiseases.（由动名词做主语）8．请根据内容提示，用英语以“LifeinSeniorHigh”为题写一篇短文，叙述你的高中生活。内容提示：总体印象：激动、快乐、辛苦；实际生活：时间紧，常熬夜；作业多，考试多；设法放松，看书打球；克服困难，不断进步；展望未来：充满信心。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可设当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】LifeinSeniorHighLifeinseniorhighschoolisexciting,happyandtiring.Aseveryoneknows,seniorhighisfarfromrelaxingandeasy.Everyminutecounts.Workinglateatnightisoftenthecase.Thereismuchhomeworkandwehavetotakemanyexams,suchasmonthlyexams.Wehavetomeetwithandovercomealotofdifficultiesinourstudies.Toourdelight,wehavemadeconstantandgreatprogresswiththehelpoftheteachers.Besidesourlessons,ofcourse,wealsomanagetomakefulluseofourfreetimetorelaxourselves.Thoughwearebusyandtired,westillfeelhappyandconfidentofourfuture.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生用英语以“LifeinSeniorHigh”为题写一篇短文，叙述高中生活。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在完成时。结构：总分总法总分总法指把开头提出论点，中间若干分论点，结尾总括论点的写作方法，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：学科网（北京）股份有限公司

9总体印象：激动、快乐、辛苦；实际生活：时间紧，常熬夜；作业多，考试多；设法放松，看书打球；克服困难，不断进步；展望未来：充满信心。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）exciting;happy;tiring;farfrom;relaxing;counts;lateatnight;monthlyexams;overcomealotofdifficulties;toourdelight;makegreatprogress;constant;withthehelpof;managetodo;makefulluseof;freetime;relaxoneself;busy;tired;confident.第三步：连词成句1.Lifeinseniorhighschoolisexciting,happyandtiring.2.Aseveryoneknows,seniorhighisfarfromrelaxingandeasy.3.Workinglateatnightisoftenthecase.4.Thereismuchhomeworkandwehavetotakemanyexams,suchasmonthlyexams.5.Wehavetomeetwithandovercomealotofdifficultiesinourstudies.6.Toourdelight,wehavemadeconstantandgreatprogresswiththehelpoftheteachers.7.Besidesourlessons,ofcourse,wealsomanagetomakefulluseofourfreetimetorelaxourselves.8.Thoughwearebusyandtired,westillfeelhappyandconfidentofourfuture.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系：Besides2.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Some…,whileothers…,so…that…(供参考)3.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult(供参考)连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]Aseveryoneknows,seniorhighisfarfromrelaxingandeasy.(由as引导限定性定语从句。)[高分句型2]Thoughwearebusyandtired,westillfeelhappyandconfidentofourfuture.(由though引导让步状语从句。)9．假定你是李华，最近在英语学习上遇到了一些问题。你给笔友Allen写了一封信，希望得到他的帮助。内容如下：1.学习热情减退；2.作业太多，疲于应付；3.……注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：减退weaken_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________学科网（北京）股份有限公司

10___________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearAllen,Howareyou?ThesedaysIamfacedwithsomeproblemsaboutmyEnglishstudy,whichhasconfusedmelong.SoIamwritingthisletterforyouradvice.Firstofall,mywishtostudyhardandgetgoodgradeshasbeenweakenedwithtimegoingby.Moreoften,IfindEnglishsoboringthatIfallasleepinclass.Besides,itseemstohaveendlesshomework,andIhavetocopyothers’tofinishit.What’sworse,Iambecomingweakerandweakerinthissubject.IsitnecessaryformetofindatutorwhocanhelpmewithmyEnglish?That’sall.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】这是一篇应用文。假定考生是李华，最近在英语学习上遇到了一些问题。你给笔友Allen写了一封信，希望得到他的帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestion首先：firstofall→firstandforemost此外：besides→what’smore无聊的：boring→dull2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：What’sworse,Iambecomingweakerandweakerinthissubject.拓展句：What’sworse,becauseIambecomingweakerandweakerinthissubject,   Iamveryanxiousaboutit.【点睛】【高分句型1】ThesedaysIamfacedwithsomeproblemsaboutmyEnglishstudy,whichhasconfusedmelong.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】IsitnecessaryformetofindatutorwhocanhelpmewithmyEnglish?（运用了it作形式主语和who引导的定语从句）10．假定你是李华，下学期你的美国朋友Jim将作为交换生到你所在的高中学习一年。请写信向Jim表示欢迎，并简要介绍中国教育和美国教育的不同。要点如下：班级学生数量不同课堂上课方式不同在校时间长短不同注意：1.词数100词左右学科网（北京）股份有限公司

112.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJim，I’mmorethangladtoknowthatyouaregoingtobeanexchangestudentinourhighschoolforawholeyear!Next,I’dliketointroducesomedifferencesbetweenChineseandAmericanteachingandlearning.First,wehavemorestudentsineachclassthanyoudo.InChina,thenumberofstudentsineachclassisusuallymorethan50.Second,wehavedifferentteachingstyles.Theteachersusuallygivelecturesintheclassandthestudentswillsetdownwhattheteachershavesaid.Third,thetimewhenwestayatschoolismuchlongerthanyours.Wemayspendatleast8hoursatschooleachday.That’sallI’dliketoshare.Ican’twaittomeetyou!Yours,LiHua【解析】下学期美国朋友Jim将作为交换生到李华所在的高中学习一年，要求写信向Jim表示欢迎，并简要介绍中国教育和美国教育的不同。要点包括：班级学生数量不同，课堂上课方式不同，在校时间长短不同。【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本文是给朋友的一封信，介绍中国教育和美国教育的不同。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I’mmorethangladtoknow……exchangestudent,introducesomedifferences,thenumberof,differentteachingstyles,can’twaittomeetyou.第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句thatyouaregoingtobeanexchangestudentinourhighschoolforawholeyear!和whattheteachershavesaid.定语从句whenwestayatschool和I’dliketoshare.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。学科网（北京）股份有限公司