写作指导与讲评数据对比ppt课件.ppt

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1、1、要养成审题的良好习惯1）文章的主题是什么（topic）?2）文章的写作目的是什么（writingpurpose）?3）文章的信息点有哪些（informationitems）?4）怎样安排信息点的逻辑顺序（writingorder）?5）文章的人称和时态是什么（tense&person）?2、提高信息的组织能力（1）信息的分类（2）信息的排列（3）信息的表达对比常用句型:(1)…usedto…,butnowowadays…过去常……，但是现在……(2)…inthepast,butnow…在过去……，但是现在…

2、…(3)once…,butnow…曾经…….，但是现在……(4)Thingsaredifferentnow.情况已大不同了(5)Butnow,everythinghaschanged.但是现在全变了开头常用句型(1)Greatchangeshavetakenplacein…inthelastpast…years.Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplacein…since….Overthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourli

3、fe.(2)Thingshavebeguntoimprovesince…（自从…以来，事情有了好转/改善）例：Thingshavebeguntoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload.(3)Thereisanincreasingtendencythat…Thereisanincreasingnumberof…whowhich…今昔对比类作文常用句型：1)Our(school/hometown),asallmayknow,isnotwhatitusedt

4、obe.2)Inthepast,therewouldbe…….Butnow,everythinghaschanged.3)Inaddition,whatmakes(theschool/hometown)morelovelyisthat……4)Ifyouwerehere,youwouldbeamazedbythebeautyofour(school/campus/hometown)常用连接词：besidesinadditionwhat’smorewhat’sworsetomakemattersworsehowever,

5、but,while基础写作（满分15分）：请按照下面表格内容提示，写一篇题为“ChangesinOurLife”的英语短文。20年前现在联系方式写信打电话、发邮件信息渠道听收音机或看报纸看电视或上网住房情况小、拥挤、家具少大、宽敞，公寓房结论20年的变化给人们的生活带来舒适和方便【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。首句已给出，不计入句数。【写作提示】宽敞spacious公寓房apartmentOverthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife

6、.Twentyyearsago,peoplecontactedeachothermainlybyletter,butnowwecanmakephone-callsorsendemailsathome.Inaddition,inthepastpeoplelistenedtotheradioorreadnewspapersfornewsandotherinformation.Nowadays,however,wecanwatchTVorsurftheInterneteasilyathomeandgetanyinformat

7、ionthatweneed.Anotherbigchangeisthatpeopleusedtoliveinsmallcrowdedroomswithlittlefurniture,whilemostofushavemovedintobigspaciousapartmentsnow.Inshort,changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtuscomfortandconvenience.Overthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangesha

8、vetakenplaceinourlife.Twentyyearsago,peoplecontactedeachothermainlybyletterandtheylistenedtotheradioorreadnewspapersfornewsandinformation.Besides,theylivedinsmallcrow