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6、enatinnlthisisalng-terslutin简评人口问题一直是一个敏感的话题。已经执行了二十多年的计划生育可以向这些高学历、洋博士们开绿灯吗?高云霞同学一针见血地指出了这一政策的不合理性。习作结构紧凑，节奏感强，段落之间有紧密的逻辑关系。如第二段看似讲这一政策的合理性，而且似已经推出了一个合理结论，但突然第三段开始笔峰一转，态度坚决地阐明了自己的立场，“Itisseenasdisriinatintardsthseharerdinarileduatedtallpepleithhighdiplatbearrehildrennl．Thisplirunsuntert·Freed，e
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