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1、期末作文讲评看法建议08-09上期末作文假设你叫李明,是英国中学生约翰的笔友.请根据他的来信内容写一封回信.针对他的问题，谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些建议,告诉他应该做什么,不应该做什么?DearLiming,Howiseverything?Asyouknow，IlikeeatinghamburgersanddrinkingCoke.Butmyparentshavestoppedgivingmepocketmoney.Theydon’tallowmetohavethatkindofthingsanymoreonlybecauseI’
2、mgettingalittleheavierandgettingtiredeasily.SoIfeelunhappyandIdon’twanttotalkwiththemathome.I’mnoweventhinkingofaskingforsomemoneyfrommygrandparentswithouttellingthem.WhatshouldIdo?I’mlookingforwardtoyouradvice.Yours,JohnDearJohn,Nicetohearfromyou.NowIknowyourtrouble.I
3、thinkyourparentsareright.Theyloveyouandwhattheydidisgoodforyou.It’simportantforustokeepfit,soyoushouldn’teatmuchjunkfood.You’dbettereatmorevegetablesandfruit.YoushoulddrinkwaterinsteadofCoke.Besides,whydon’tyoudosomesportseveryday.It’sgoodforyourhealth,too.Ontheotherha
4、nd,youshouldn’taskformoneyfromWritingtogetheryourgrandparents.Inmyopinion,it’sagoodideatotalkwithyourparentsaboutit.Ifyoudon’tspendmoneyonjunkfood,yourparentswillkeepgivingyousomepocketmoney.Ihopeyoucansolvetheproblemsoon.Yours,LiMingRelatedPractice1假如你是李明,你的美国笔友发给你一份邮
5、件。请针对他的问题，结合自己的经历,做做他的思想工作。告诉他你起先是如何做的，后来有了什么变化，在给他提一些建议。DearLiMing,I’vegotsomeseriousproblems.Allthesubjectshavemademeverytired.I’vefailedsomanyexamsthatIreallywanttogiveupmystudy.WhatshallIdo?Pleasehelpme.TomDearTom,Nicetohearfromyou.NowIknowyourproblems.Don’tworry.I
6、hadthesameproblemslastyear.IwasweakinEnglishandIalmostgaveupEnglishlearning.ButIkeptonlearninghardanddoinghomeworkmorecarefullythanbefore.NowIcanfollowteachersandcatchupwithotherstudents.Ihavemadegreatprogress.Ok,Letmegiveyousomeadvice.First,don’tgiveupyourstudy.Ifyoul
7、istencarefullyinclass,youaresuretogetgoodgradessoon.Second,youcanaskyourteachersandfriendsforhelpwhenyoumeetproblems.Inaword,believeinyourselfandworkharder,youcansolvetheproblemssoon.(范文1领学生课上完成)DearTim,Ialsohavethesamekindofproblemsasyou.Atfirst,Iusedtobeafraidofthem.
8、WheneverIwasintrouble,Iwouldasksomebodyelseforhelpimmediatelyorgiveupwithoutmakinganyeffort.Butthatmadethingsworseins
