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1、10月月考作文讲评Tips高考英语书面表达高分标准①覆盖所有内容要点②应用较多的语法结构和词汇③有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑假如你是高三(1)班的班长李华，得知美国学生Chris作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件。(1)表示欢迎；(2)介绍本班情况及与本地生活相关的信息（如气候，饮食等）；(3)希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊。DearChris,I’mLiHua,monitorofClassOne,GradeTwelve.___________
2、_________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaI.审题：体裁和格式：人称:写作内容及时态：邮件（属书信体，格式已给出）书面表达you,I,we一般现在时，一般将来时注意：(1)请勿提及相关的真实信息；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；(3)词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。在作文里不能涉及任何所在地区、
3、学校的信息，否则高考时会被视为作弊行为。字数不能超12行，否则扣2分！转换应试意识表达言简意赅II.佳句背诵1.Knowing/When/Onknowingthenewsthatyou’recomingtobewithusasanexchangestudentthiscomingterm,wecannotconcealourexcitementandlookforwardtoyourarrival.得知…我们….2.Themomentweknowthenewsthat…wordsfailtodescribeo
4、urexcitement）得知…我们…..二.介绍-----同位语，非谓语，定从，with结构1.Ourclassconsistsof50optimisticandeasy-goingstudents,allofwhomarewillingtoacceptyouasoneofusandmakeyoufeelathome.Notonlywilltheymakeacquaintancewithyou,butalsotheywouldliketogiveyouahandwhenyouareinrouble.2.My
5、Class,abigfamilyconsistingof50optimisticandeasy-goingstudents,arewillingtoacceptyouasoneofusandmakeyoufeelathome.4.Consistingof50students,ourclassseemslikeabigfamilywitharelaxingandharmoniousatmosphere,whichwillmakeyoufeelathome.3.Consistingof50optimistican
6、deasy-goingstudents,myclassisabigfamily,inwhichwelivetogetherinharmony.4.Class1,whereyouaregoingtostudy,isabigfamilyconsistingof50students,allofwhomarewillingtoacceptyouasoneofusandmakeyoufeelathome.5.Mycity,afascinatingharbor/afascinatingcoastalcity,enjoys
7、pleasantweather,withbrightsunshinealltheyearround.6.LocatedinthesouthofChina,ourcityisrich/abundantin/isdistinguishedforseafood,whichIhopeyou’lllike/you’llgetaccustomedto7.ComparedwithAmerica,theweatherheremaybedifferentfromthatinyourhometown.（非谓语)AndhereI’
8、lltellyousomethingaboutthelocallife,whichmaybedifferentfromthatinyourhometown.8.Weallviewthisasapreciouschanceforustolearnaboutwhatlifeislikeinyourcountry,especiallyschoollife.Meanwhile,wecanhaveourspo
