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1、第4次测验作文讲评应用文写作之邀请信返回目录问题:1书写问题2漏写邀请对方参加的原因3句型欠地道4内容冗长，缺乏简洁5.意思欠明确6.语法错误单词拼写错误(hold/held/charater)◇写作点拨◇邀请信是写信人对收信人的一种盛情邀约，一般分为正式的和非正式的两种。格式与其他信函相同。具体写作步骤：第一段：说明与收信人的相关性与写作意图。第二段：具体交代情景：包括受邀请的人、邀请朋友要干什么、地点以及具体的时间等内容。并且强调为什么邀请收信人而不是别的朋友。返回目录第三段：表示期待收信人的回复。就本质而言正式与非正
2、式的邀请信并没有什么区别，只是正式的邀请信比较注意文采，而且往往需要表现出更加诚恳的态度。邀请信一般都要求考生邀约朋友参加特殊聚会，共度假期，或者访问自己的家乡等，考生可以采用非正式文体。返回目录问题1.Thepartywillbeginat7o’clockPM，thenendat10o’clockintheeveningon3rdSeptember.Itwilltakeplaceinthecanteenofourschool.非谓语可以使句子简洁Theparty,heldincanteenofourschoolwillb
3、eginfrom7o’clockpmendingat10o’clockintheeveningon3rdSeptember.2.AseveryoneknowsourschoolisfamousforEnglish,soyourpresencewillmustmakeagreateffectontheparty.ItiswellknownthatourschoolisfamousforEnglish,soforeignteacherpresencewillbringencouragementtoEnglishlearner.
4、Asiswellknownthatlearningshouldneedencouragement,soyourpresencewillcheeruptheenthusiasminlearningEnglish.特殊句式，准确表达可以使句子意思更清楚3.Itisscheduled,pleaseenjoyourprogramsintheschoolstadium.Amongthesewonderfulprogramswillbesinging,dancing,dramacting,magictricks,funnyplaysa
5、ndsoon.PerformanceisscheduledonSeptember5th.from8:00pmto10:30pmintheformofsinging,dancing,dramopera,magictricksandfunnyplays,someofwhichwillsurelyattractyou.短语、非限制性定语从句可以使句子简洁，意思更清楚4.What’smore,anexcellentteacherwilldeliveraspeechonbehalfofourschoolattheendofthepa
6、rty,andthat’swhyIamwritingtoinviteyou.Youdosowellinteachingusasaforeignteacherthatwestudentsallagreetoinviteyoutodosuchameaningfulthing.句子间缺乏连贯What’smore,anexcellentEnglishteacher‘scomingwillgiveagreatencouragementtofreshmen.Especially,itwillbeperfectifyoucandeliv
7、eranenthusiasticspeechforus,whichisalsothereasonwhyweinviteyou.5.Asthechairmanofthestudentunion,Isincerelyshowtheinvitationtoyou,whichisbecauseit’sagoodideatoknowthenewstudentsandformaclosefriendshipwiththem.Besides,youcanrelaxyourselfafterlong-termbusywork.Sowhat
8、doyouthinkofattendingthisparty?句子表达生硬，语言欠地道自然，语气欠委婉Itisagreathonorformetoinviteyoutocometothepartyonbehalfofthestudentunionhelpingyougetagoodunderstandi
