海淀期末作文讲评.ppt

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1、假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的班长李华,你们班的外教Lisa已经结束本学期的教学工作回到美国，请代表你们班给她写一封邮件。邮件的内容包括：1.询问她的近况；2.回顾在外教课上的收获；3.表达对她的感谢和祝福。Whattowrite?Part1Beginning（Purposeofwriting）询问Lisa在美国的近况；思念；代表全班表示感谢（引出下文）。Part2MainBody--回顾在外教课上的收获；1.Writesupportingdetails2.Usingfactsratherthanopinionwordseg.英语知识；美国文化；情感态度（eg.学习兴趣，自信，乐观）等

2、等.Part3.Ending表达对她的感谢(真诚)和祝福。1.感谢：应与上文逻辑对应、连贯。感谢简洁。2.祝福什么？祝福：事业、身体、家庭等。（12分）：结构、要点齐全，语言质量较好，但连贯性稍弱，从一档文降为二档文。（13分）：要点齐全，语言质量好，条理清晰，虽有个别语言错误，但不影响全文连贯性。（14分）内容完整，条理清晰、连贯，语言句式较丰富，逻辑清晰，体现出较强的语言运用能力（流畅性稍弱）。DearLisa,Howiseverythinggoing?Iamwritingonbehalfofmyclasstosendourbestwishestoyou.It’sbeenawhil

3、esinceyoufisnishedyourteachingthistermandreturnedtoAmerica.Areyouenjoyingyourlifewithyourfamily?Weknowyoumustbe,yetwestillcan’thelpthinkingaboutyou,foryou’vetaughtusalotinyourclasses.WhatyouledustodoisnotonlyearningEnglish,butalsolearningtoappreciatedanotherculture.Theexperienceyousharedwithusan

4、dyourenergyinlearningwillalwaysaccompanyus.Wearethankfulforyouandtheyearwespenttogether.Andwehopethatyoucancontinuehavingfunintheteachingcareerandbehealthyforever.Welookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,Lihua（15分）内容完整，条理清楚、文章整体连贯、流畅，交际得体，语言句式丰富，体现出较强的语言运用能力。Howareyoudoingrecently?Iamwritingonbehalfofm

5、ywholeclasstoexpressoursincereloveandappreciationtoyou.Hopeeverthingisgoingonwellwithyou.Inthepastsemester,wewereluckytohaveyouasourteacher.Icanstillrememberyoutellingjokesandhavinghunwithus.Thelaughteroncefilledtheroomstillringinginmyhead.IrememberyouintroducingAmericanLiteraturetouswithgreatpa

6、ssionandevensparksshininginyoureyes.Withallofusdeeplysunkinthismarvelousunknownworld,youwouldalwayswinkyoureyesandsmilecontently.Yourenthusiasmhasservedtoleaveuswithalong-lastinglovetowardsnotonlyEnglishbutalsoourlife.Wereallyappreciateyourloveandallthedevotionthatyou’veputintoteachingus.Wehopey

7、ou’llcontinuetoliveahappyandcolorfullifeinAmerica!Whattowrite?假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“AvisittotheMuseumoftheAnti-JapaneseWar”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍你们班同学参观抗日战争纪念馆的过程。注意：词数不少于60。到达参观听抗战老兵讲故事合影要点大门、校车、导游、欢迎围成圈坐下、聚精会神、问答、勋