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1、2013年海淀二模作文讲评审题上周你接待美国交换生Mike；为帮助他了解中国传统文化，你为他安排了一系列的活动；图1：机场接机图2：游胡同图3.看京剧图4.送礼物Tense:did1.tolearntheChinesetraditionalculture2.pickhimupattheairport3.payavisittoMaoerHutong4.watchBeijingOpera5.sendsomespecialgifts评分原则：1．本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要
2、求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3．评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。4．拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5．词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。各档次的给分范围和要求：细节prepareaseriesofvariousactivitieschathappilyallthewayhaveaninterestingrickshawtourfeelamazedatthecolourfulcostumesanduniquewayofperform
3、ingoperamaskandChineseknotwithChineseelements1.tolearntheChinesetraditionalculture2.pickhimupattheairport3.payavisittoMaoerHutong4.watchBeijingOpera5.sendsomespecialgifts就地取材25Withhundredsofattractions,Beijingisacitywhichmakesalastingimpressiononvisitors.BeforeleavingforAme
4、rica,Mikewasreluctantly/unwillingtosaygoodbyetome,expresslinghisgratitudewithhundredsofattractions,BeijingisacitywhichmakesalastingimpressiononmeAWiththeaidofthedriver'svividintroduction,weenjoyedtheinstructiveHutongtour.BmeansoftransportWechoseourtraditionalmeansoftranspor
5、t,richshaw.DaseriesofaseriesofvariousactivitiesFromanindustryperspective.Lastweek,IreceivedanexchangestudentMikefromtheUS.Thefirstday,IwenttopickhimupattheCapitalAirportandwechattedhappilyalongtheway.InordertogethimtoknowChineseculture,Ipreparedaseriesofactivities.Forexampl
6、e,onthesecondday,wepaidavisittothefamousMaoerHutong,wherewehadaninterestingrickshawtour.Mikefeltveryexcitedaboutthedriver’svividintroductiontothehistoryofHutongs.Thefollowingday,ItookhimtoMeiLanfangGrandTheatretowatchBeijingOpera.Althoughhecouldunderstandfewwords,hewasstill
7、amazedtoseethecolorfulcostumesandtheuniquewayofperforming.WhenitwastimeforhimtoreturntotheUS,IsenthimsomegiftswithChineseelements,suchasaBeijingOperamaskandaChineseknot.HewasverygratefulforwhatIhaddoneandsaidhewasreallyimpressedbythediversifiedChineseculture.Fromthisexperie
8、nce,IfeltproudofbeingaChineseandfeltitmydutytointroduceChineseculturetotheworld.第二
