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1、初中英语作文课程作文写作的字、词、句、段、篇字:工整、清楚;词:不拼写错误;能适当掌握高级词汇;句:不出现语法错误;句子要逐渐使用复杂的从句句型,为文章添彩;段:段落内容有逻辑性;篇:合理安排文章布局;要有逻辑与联接;绝对好用的替换词Good–wonderful,excellent,gorgeous,fabulous,amazing,magnificent;Important–significant,essential,necessary,carryalotofweight;But—However,So—therefore,hence,Primarily,Firstly,oneofthe
2、mostessentialreasons,tostressfirstSecondly,abovefromthefirstpoint,InadditionThirdly,Lastbutnoleast,Inconclusion,tomakeaconclusion,tosummarize…举例Forexample—Forinstance,totake….asanexample,tostateafactasanvividexample,经典句型:1、It’ssaidthat…2、Nomatterwhat/which/who/where/when/whose+从句3、Itis/was+被强调部分+
3、that(who)+剩余部分4、Ithappened(chanced)that+从句=sb.Happened/chancedtodosth.=sb.didsthbychance5、由as引导的非限制性定句从句/由where,when引导的定语从句6、It+谓语+时间段+before+主语+谓语(before引导的是时间状语从句)7、When/Solongas/Aslongas/Once+从句,+主句(从句也可放在主句之后)8、Nosooner+had+主语+done…than+主语+did9、倍数表达句型倍数+morethan,倍数+asmuchas..10、形容词、副词、名词+as/t
4、hough+主语+谓语+主句句式多变化要抓住英语作文得高分的”关键点”,就需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词汇这两道关。(1)句式要有变化。改变句子的开头方式,不要一味地以主语开头,接着是谓语,宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语放在句首,或用分词作状语等。[原文]Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.[修改]Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardt
5、hebadnews.[修改]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.(2)在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、复合句、状语从句等。①强调句[原文]MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.Ithadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.[修改]MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.②由what等引导的从句,此处的what相当于中文中的“所……”,有很强的概括,如
6、:[原文]Wehadtostandheretocatchoffender.[修改]Whatwehadtodowas(to)standthere,tryingtocatchtheoffender.③由with或without引导的短语。如:Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.④分词短语.如:Satisfiedwiththeresult,hedicidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.⑤倒装句Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.
7、⑥省略句Ifso,victorywillbeours.Youcanmakesomechangeswherevernecessary.⑦对比,这在中文中也是常使用的方法.如Failureisnotacrime,butfailuretolearnfromfailureis.WhenIplay,Ifeelexcited,andafteritIfeelrelaxed.(3)通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。[原文]Hestopped