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《浙江省2019高考英语写作导练案第三讲概要写作练习》由会员上传分享,免费在线阅读,更多相关内容在教育资源-天天文库。
1、第三讲 概要写作李仕才典例展示(2016·浙江高考样题)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwash
2、ingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidtheKingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryⅣ,K
3、ingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,theKingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.Thoughthebeliefinthemerit(好处)ofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18century.Scientificall
4、yspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarⅡ.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea:Clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter
5、,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家),en
6、courageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatter(后者)positionisgainingsomeground.【参考范文】Peoplehavemixedopinionsaboutdirtonourskin.(要点1)Foralongtimeinhistory,peopleofsomeEuropeancountriesbelievedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.(要点2)Howeve
7、r,peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestowardsdirtabout200yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.(要点3)Yet,somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.(要点4)思路导航一、审题体裁议论文人称第三人称时态一般现在时和一般过去时为主要点1.第一段“However,thereisnothi
8、ngfixedaboutattitudestodirt.”是本篇文章的主题句,亮明了总的观点。2.第二段主要谈论的是在16世纪,人们认为“dirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease”。3.第三段用“Though”引出人们对dirt观点的转变“...sin
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