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1、从低分写作实例总结：雅思写作黄金6法则 Topic:Universitiesshouldacceptequalnumbersofmaleandfemalestudentsineverysubject.Towhatextentdoyouagreeofdisagree?Accordingtouniversitiesshouldacceptequalnumbersofmaleandfemalestudentsineverysubject.Therefore,thisessaywillshowsomereasonsofargumentforand
2、argumentagaint.范文1：Firstly,Iwilldiscussabouttworeasonsofargumentfortobeginwithuniversitiesshouldacceptequalnumbrsofmaleandfemalestudentsineverysubjectbecauseitwillbebalanceofideawhilestudying.Ingeneral,thereusuallyaredifferentideasbetweenmanandwoman.Theseleadtonewideasfrom
3、differentvisionwillhappen.Anotherreasonisitdisplaythathaveequalofsocietynotecceptineachside.Inaddition,nowadays,themostsocietiesbecometoacceptabilityofbothinanyway.Secondly,Iwilldiscussaboutonereasonofargumentsagainstthatissomesubjectsnotsuitableforeachother.forexample,som
4、esubjectsofsportssuchasweightputting.Itisnotsuitableforfemalebecausetherearedifferentofbodybetweenmaleandfemale.Inconclusion,Iagreewithuniversitiesshouldacceptequalnumbersofmaleanfemalestudentsineverysubject.Moreover,itdependonwhatthesubjectsthatthestudentswanttostudy,they
5、canchoosebythemselvesbecauseIbelievethatifthestudentsliketostudytheirsubjects,theywilldoitwellsothatIstronglyagreewiththistopic.4分的原因：首先，该同学在语法上的缺陷是致命的，多数句子都不符合英语句子结构的要求，如：Theseleadtonewideasfromdifferentvisionwillhappen.Leadto已经是谓语动词了，后面再出现willhappen就是错误的，要知道后一个动词需要采取去动词性
6、质处理：ThisotherstaffoftheCentre.Duringthewar,ZhuwastransferredbacktoJiangxi,andDirectorofthenewOfficeinJingdezhen,JiangxiCommitteeSecretary.Startingin1939servedasrecorderoftheWestNorthOrganization,SecretaryoftheSpecialCommitteeAfterthevictoryofthelongMarch,hehasbeentheNorthw
7、estOfficeoftheFederationofStateenterprisesMinister,ShenmufuguSARmissions,DirectorofNingxiaCountypartyCommitteeSecretaryandrecorderoftheCountypartyCommitteeSecretary,Ministersand四川外国语大学外语培训中心：www.sisupeixun.comwillleadtonewideasfromdifferentperspectiveshappening其实这句话也很罗嗦，完全
8、可以改成：Thiswillleadtoawidervarietyofideas.另外一句：Anotherreasonisitdisplaythathaveequalofsocie
