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1、CommentariesontheVersionof“一个女人是这样衰老的”一个女人是这样衰老的SV：HowaWomanAges/AWoman’sAging/AWomanFadesThus/WhatcausesaWomantoGrowOld/TheWayinWhichawomanisAging/HowaWomanGetsOldRV:TheWayWomanWithers点评：RhetoricalDevice:distillationandaesthetichightlightsoflanguage,eitherChinese
2、orEnglish/Thesuccessfulemploymentofalliteration(头韵)1．二十岁的时候，我穿着一条背心式牛仔裙在校园里走来走去，一说话就脸红。三十岁的我穿着名牌套装，坐在办公桌前，满脸冷酷地对下属说：“这么愚蠢的问题你也敢问？也不先打个草稿。”SV:Attheageoftwenty,Iwalkedaboutonthecampus,wearingavestlikejeanskirt.MyfacewouldturnredwheneverIspeak.AfterIhaveturnedthirty,
3、Iamseatedinfrontofabureau,inasuitoffamousbrand,reproachingasubordinatecoldly“Howdareyouasksuchastupidquestion?Whydidn’tyoumakeadraftfirst?”RV:Attheageoftwenty,wearingajeansjumper,Imovedaboutonthecampus,myfaceblushingthemomentIhadtheinclinationtomakeanutterance.Att
4、heageofthirty,I,wearingafamous-brandsuitandacoldlook,reproachmysubordinatebluntly,“Howcanyougosofarastoraisesuchasilly,mindlessquestion?”点评：Zeugma(轭式修饰法)：afigureofspeechinwhichasingleword,usuallyaverboradjective,issyntacticallyrelatedtotwoormorewords,thoughhavinga
5、differentsenseinrelationtoeach.Moreexamples:Thesenatorpickeduphishatandhiscourage/Shepossessedtwofalseteethandasympatheticheart/Helostthegameandhistemper.1．二十岁的时候，从图书馆借的是《莎士比亚全集》、《一个青年艺术家的自画像》和《尤里西斯》。三十岁之后，床头摆的是《跟庄密笈》、《ELLE》和《经理人的个人魅力》.SV:Attheageoftwenty,TheColle
6、ctedWorksofShakespeare,ThePortraitofanArtistasaYoungMan,andUlysseswereborrowedfromthelibrary.Afterthirty,StrategyofSpeculationonStocks,ELLEandManager’sPersonalCharmwereputonthebedside.RV:Attheageoftwenty,IborrowedbooksfromthelibrarylikeShakespeare’sCompleteWorks,A
7、PortraitoftheArtistasaYoungMan,Ulysses.Afterthirty,onmybedside,liesuchbooksandmagazinesasTheRecipeonStocks,ElleandManager’sCharm.点评：Syntactically（依照句法地）,aestheticvaluegoestoEng-WeightnessinEnglish,whichisnotthecasewithChinese.Forexample:GonearethedayswhenIwasyoung
8、.VS.ThedayswhenIwasyoungaregone.Wordcamethatbribery行贿hassenthimtoprison.VS.Wordthatbriberyhassenthimtoprisoncame.1．二十岁的暑假，在家乡的大街上偶遇自己的暗恋对象，听说他考上了研究生，被他的
