高中学生书面表达纠错探索.ppt

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1、学生作业众人探讨3安徽怀远二中英语组姚海岭2007.17/29/202111、Inthelastyear,mymotherandIwanttoBeijingbytrain.Iwasabouttoaskattendantwaterwhenannouncersaid:"Ourtraindon‘thavewaterforyours.”,andIveryworriedmymother.2、InthetrainIaccursedsomethings3、Mr.Wangandhermothercandonothingbutwaittheattendanttosellthew

2、atertothem.4、ButIhaveaexperiencewhichismakemeveryangryonthetrain.单句改错\wantedΛanΛandoesn’tyouΛwascameacrosscouldhadanmadeΛaboutfor7/29/202125、Itissoexpensivethanoften.Butwearesothirstyhavetobuyit.Ithinkthisisnotagoodwaytomakemoney.6、Butweallwereangrywiththiswaywhichmademoney.7、Somep

3、eoplewassothirty，thattheyhadnochoicebuttobuy.Ithinkpeopleshouldputintoprison.wasusualwereΛthatwehadwaswereallΛitΛbe7/29/202138、LastSunday,IwenttoTianjingbytrain,butthethingshappenedonthetrainmademeveryangryandsad.Somepeopletoothirstyhadnochoicebuttobuyabottleofsodawater.9、Thatwasmy

4、unforgottedtimetotraveltotheGreatWall.ΛthatΛweretohaveunforgotten7/29/2021410、Heardthat,Ithinkthetrainbegantogetnoise.11、Becausewewerefeelthirstyandholdthemugwanttohadsomewater.Ifeelalittleangryforthis，buthadsaynothingwewereallthirstybutwehadnochoicebuttoendure,Justthen，anattendantp

5、ulledatruckwhichputanysodawateron.HearingfeltheldΛ,wewantedfeltΛIΛtoΛ.Wewith7/29/2021512、Whatreallymoneysuchimportantis!13、Thetrainonlyearnedtheoldpeople’smoney,weyoupeoplewouldnotbuyit.14、Weallsurprised,it’stooexpensive,butwealltodaymoreandmorepeopleliveonlyformoneythatmakesmefeel

6、cold.Howimportantsuchmoneyreallyis!;\Λwere.It’s\,which7/29/2021615、Iseatedwithanoldwoman.Wewerechatveryhappy.16、Therewasaattendantpulledsomesodawaterandsomesodawater,sowemustagainstthem.Λwaschattinghappilyanpulling\\Λbe7/29/2021717、Everyoneshouldberesponsibilytomakeourlifepeacea

7、ndnice.18、Whathappenedonthatdaymademethinkthatallformoney.19、Iwassohungrythatveryangry.responsiblepeacefulΛwasΛIwas7/29/2021820、Thepricewastooexpensive.Icouldn’tchoosebuthavetobuy,becauseIwasverythirsty.21、IhadbeentoShanghaibytrain.Everyonelookedtiredandboring.Noonewantwhattosaidoth

8、ers.Peoplewantdrank