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2023年高考真题变式题分类汇编专题10书面表达真题变式题（甲卷）【2023年真题】适用地区：广西、贵州、四川、西藏以英语讲述中国故事为主题的征文活动，请以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearChris,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours,LiHua【参考范文】Dear Chris,IwouldliketointroduceyoutoafamousChinesehistoricalfigure,SuDongpo.SuDongpowasatalentedpoet,calligrapher,painter,andpolitician.Hispoetrywasknownforitssimplicityandhumor,andheisregardedasoneofthegreatestpoetsinChinesehistory.SuDongpowasalsoknownforhispoliticalcareer,servingasanofficialinvariouspositions.Hewasknownforhisstrongsenseofjusticeanddesiretohelpthecommonpeople.However,hisoutspokennessandcriticismofcorruptofficialsledtohimbeingexiledonseveraloccasions.Inadditiontohisliteraryandpoliticalachievements,SuDongpowasalsoaskilledcalligrapherandpainter.HisworksarehighlyregardedinChinesearthistoryandarestillstudiedandadmiredtoday.学科网（北京）股份有限公司 Overall,SuDongpowasamultifacetedandinfluentialfigureinChinesehistory,knownforhiscontributionstoliterature,art,andpolitics.Yours, LiHua【真题变式题1】请你根据下列要点提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，简要介绍中国著名画家张大千。1.出生于1899年，1983年去世。年轻时学诗。受妈妈和哥哥的影响学习中国画；2.他不断地学习和探索西方绘画，形成了自己独特的风格；3.他一生中大部分时间都在临摹传统绘画；4.他被认为是二十世纪最有天赋的画家之一。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ZhangDaqian,bornin1899,isagreatartistinChina.Whenhewasyoung,helearntpoetryandhelearntChinesepaintingfromhismamaandbrotherandgainedlotsofexperiencefromthem.Hekeptonlearningandstartingtoexplorewesternpaintingswhenhegotolder,whichreallyhelpedhimformhisuniquestyle.Hediedin1983.Throughouthislife,hedevotedmostoftimetocopyingtraditionalpainting.Hewasregardedasoneofthemostgiftedpaintersinthe20thcentury,whichisanhonourofChinesepeople.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生简要介绍中国著名画家张大千。【详解】1.词汇积累伟大的：great→grand学习：learn→study获得：gain→get被看作：beregardas→beconsideredas学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：ZhangDaqian,bornin1899,isagreatartistinChina.拓展句：ZhangDaqian,whowasbornin1899,isagreatartistinChina.【点睛】【高分句型1】Hekeptonlearningandstartingtoexplorewesternpaintingswhenhegotolder,whichreallyhelpedhimformhisuniquestyle.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Hewasregardedasoneofthemostgiftedpaintersinthe20thcentury,whichisanhonourofChinesepeople.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【真题变式题2】我校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1.他(她)面对的困难和做出的选择；2.他(她)身上值得学习的品质或美德。注意：1.词数80以上；2.要求使用句式：非谓语结构，定语从句；3.可增加连接成分，是结构清晰，行文连贯；4.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。5.请避免泄露个人信息，包括姓名、学校、班级等。ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeople.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThepersonIrespect学科网（北京）股份有限公司 Therearemanyrespectablepeople.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymind,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参加学校正在组织的英语作文比赛。【详解】1.词汇积累喜欢：love→haveapassionfor陪伴某人：accompanysb.→keepsb.company遇到：comeacross→meetwith克服：overcome→getover2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.拓展句：Heachievedalotinhiswork,whoisrespectedbyhisstudents.【点睛】【高分句型1】Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.（运用了who引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和and连接的并列句）【真题变式题3】假定你是李华，受校英文报约稿，请你写一篇介绍某位名人的英语短文，刊登在校英文报People专栏，内容包括：1.该人物的生平；学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2.他的主要事迹；3.你的评价。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】YuanLongping,knownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”,isoneofChina’smostfamousscientists.YuanLongpingwasborninSeptember1930anddiedin2021,aged91.Hecultivatedtheworld’sfirsthigh-yieldinghybridrice,whichhashelpedfeednearlyone-fifthoftheworld’spopulation.AfterfightingChina’sfoodshortages,heturnedhisattentiontoamuchbiggerchallenge,solvingworldhunger.Sincethe1980s,Yuan’steamhasofferedtrainingcoursesindozensofcountriesinAfrica,theAmericasandAsia,providingahugefoodsourceinareaswithhighrisksoffamine.YuanLongping’slegacyisnotonlytheprogressofhybridrice-hiscuriosity,devotion,courage,perseverance,diligence,cooperationandselflessnesshaveleftanindeliblespiritualwealthtousall.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于受校英文报约稿这一情况，写一篇介绍某位名人的英语短文，刊登在校英文报People专栏。【详解】1.词汇积累培育：cultivated→breed提供：offer→provide巨大的：huge→enormous财富：wealth→treasure2.句式拓展简单句变复合句学科网（北京）股份有限公司 原句：YuanLongping,knownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”,isoneofChina’smostfamousscientists.拓展句：YuanLongping,whoisknownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”,isoneofChina’smostfamousscientists.【点睛】【高分句型1】Hecultivatedtheworld’sfirsthigh-yieldinghybridrice,whichhashelpedfeednearlyone-fifthoftheworld’spopulation.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Sincethe1980s,Yuan’steamhasofferedtrainingcoursesindozensofcountriesinAfrica,theAmericasandAsia,providingahugefoodsourceinareaswithhighrisksoffamine.（运用了现在分词作状语）【真题变式题4】假设你是李华。在外教Michael的口语课上，你需要做一个简短的英文阅读分享，介绍一本你喜欢的人传记(biography)或自传(autobiography)。内容包括：1.书目名称;2.分享理由。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出。Goodmorning,mydearfellowclassmates!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall!Thankyouforyourlistening.【答案】Goodmorning.mydearfellowclassmates!Itismygreatpleasuretosharewithyouoneofmyfavoriteautobiographies.ItistheEnglishversionofTheStoryofMyLife,writtenbyHelenKeller.Inthebook,Helengaveavividaccountofherownexperiencesfromhereventfulchildhoodtoher学科网（北京）股份有限公司 extraordinaryadulthood.Thehighlightisparticularlyaboutlifespentwithherteacher,AnneSullivan,forwhosehelpsheexpressesherdeep-feltgratitude.Thelanguageisbeautiful,youcanfindpeaceandpowerinheraccounts.ItisalwaysconsideredoneoftheclassicalworksinAmericanliterature.Ibelievebyreadingthebook,notonlywillyougetatasteofthebeautyofEnglishlanguage,youmayalsofindyourselfinspiredandtouched,thushavingamoreinclusiveandoptimisticattitudetowardlife.That’sall!Thankyouforyourlistening!【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生介绍一本喜欢的人传记(biography)或自传(autobiography)，在外教Michael的口语课上做一个简短的英文阅读分享，内容包括书目名称以及分享的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累描述：account→description表达：express→convey认为：consider→think感动的：touched→moved2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：ItistheEnglishversionofTheStoryofMyLife,writtenbyHelenKeller.拓展句：ItistheEnglishversionofTheStoryofMyLife,whichwaswrittenbyHelenKeller.【点睛】【高分句型1】Thehighlightisparticularlyaboutlifespentwithherteacher,AnneSullivan,forwhosehelpsheexpressesherdeep-feltgratitude.（运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Ibelievebyreadingthebook,notonlywillyougetatasteofthebeautyofEnglishlanguage,youmayalsofindyourselfinspiredandtouched,thushavingamoreinclusiveandoptimisticattitudetowardlife.（运用了notonly…butalso…连接的并列结构以及倒装句和现在分词作结果状语）【真题变式题5】你校英文报正在征集以PersonoftheYear为题的征文，请你写一篇英语短文投稿。内容包括：1.你心中的“年度人物”；2.选择该人物的原因；3.你得到的启发。学科网（北京）股份有限公司 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。PersonoftheYearInmyheart,“PersonoftheYear”shouldbesomeone________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】                                                            PersonoftheYearInmyheart,“PersonoftheYear”shouldbesomeonewhoattractedwidespreadattentioninthecurrentyear.IrecomendmyclassmateLiMingtobethemostbeautifulpersonoftheyear.Asourmonitor,LiMingisnotonlygoodatlearning,butalsowillingtohelpstudentswithpoorgrades.Undertheinfluenceofhisexample,ourclassgotthefirstplaceinthissemester.What’smore,hesavedanoldmanwhosuddenlyfaintedlastmonth.Inthecurrentsituationoflackoftrustbetweenpeople,hedidnotconsiderpersonalgainsandlosses,anddidfirstaidtotheoldmanwithouthesitation,savinghislifeintime.SoIrecommendLiMingthePersonoftheYear.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作，你校英文报正在征集以PersonoftheYear为题的征文，请你写一篇英语短文投稿。内容包括：1.你心中的“年度人物”；2.选择该人物的原因；3.你得到的启发。【详解】1.词汇积累广泛的：widespread→extensive擅长：begoodat→beskilledin值得：beworthyof→beworth学科网（北京）股份有限公司 此外：What’smore→Besides2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：IrecomendmyclassmateLiMingtobethemostbeautifulpersonoftheyear.Asourmonitor,LiMingisnotonlygoodatlearning,butalsowillingtohelpstudentswithpoorgrades.拓展句：IrecomendmyclassmateLiMingtobethemostbeautifulpersonoftheyear,becauseasourmonitor,LiMingisnotonlygoodatlearning,butalsowillingtohelpstudentswithpoorgrades.【点睛】[高分句型1]Inmyheart,“PersonoftheYear”shouldbesomeonewhoattractedwidespreadattentioninthecurrentyear.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Inthecurrentsituationoflackoftrustbetweenpeople,hedidnotconsiderpersonalgainsandlosses,anddidfirstaidtotheoldmanwithouthesitation,savinghislifeintime.(运用了现在分词作状语)【真题变式题6】高中毕业在即,你校英语俱乐部将举行“HeartfeltThankstoMyTeacher”的主题演讲比赛,目的是令学生感恩一位对自己有深刻影响的老师。请你准备一篇英语演讲稿,要点如下：1.影响你的具体事例;2.给你带来的改变;3.你对老师的祝福。注意:1.词数100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;3.不得出现真实的人名或地名。Howtimeflies!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【答案】Howtimeflies!Wearegoingtograduatesoon.Standinghere,IfeelprivilegedtohavethisopportunitytoexpressmyheartfeltappreciationtoMs.Wang,myEnglishteacher.Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,Ican’tthankhertoomuch.WhenIenteredseniorhigh,Iwasdeeplyimpressedbyherexcellentpronunciationandpatience.Therefore,IwasdeterminedtoworkhardatEnglish.However,atonetime,thepressureofexaminations.toomuchhomeworkandthehighexpectationsmademesodepressedthatIcouldn’tfocusonmystudy.Havingnoticedeverything,sheofferedmesomeconstructiveadvice.Itwasherconstantencouragementthathelpedmerestoreconfidenceandbecomepositiveagain.Feelingdeeplygratefultoherforwhatshehasdoneforme,Iwishherallthebest.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为你校英语俱乐部将举行“HeartfeltThankstoMyTeacher”的主题演讲比赛写一篇英语演讲稿。【详解】1.词汇积累荣幸的：privileged→honored机会：opportunity→chance感激：appreciation→gratitude极好的：excellent→wonderful2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Standinghere,IfeelprivilegedtohavethisopportunitytoexpressmyheartfeltappreciationtoMs.Wang,myEnglishteacher.拓展句：WhenIstandhere,IfeelprivilegedtohavethisopportunitytoexpressmyheartfeltappreciationtoMs.Wang,myEnglishteacher.【点睛】【高分句型1】Lookingbackonthepastthreeyears,Ican’tthankhertoomuch.(运用了非谓语动词作伴随状语)【高分句型2】Itwasherconstantencouragementthathelpedmerestoreconfidenceandbecomepositiveagain.(运用了强调句型)【真题变式题7】学科网（北京）股份有限公司 假如你是李华，你要申请成为教育博览会的志愿者，请根据以下要点用英语写一篇个人简介。1.基本情况；2.个性和特长；3.其他。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MynameisLiHua.I’mwillingtoserveasavolunteeroftheEducationFair.Belowismypersonalprofile.I’mahighschoolstudent.I’minterestedinsciencesubjectsatschoolandenjoydoingsportsafterschool.Myfavoritesportsincludeswimming,joggingandplayingbasketball.I’manoutgoingpersonwhoenjoysteamwork.WhenIwasfourteen,IjoinedinasummercampandtouredsomecitiesintheUSA,visitingmanyfamousuniversities.Thisexperienceopenedawindowformetoseetheworldandexperienceadifferentculture.Alsoithelpedmeopen“mymouth”tospeakEnglishbravely.That’swhyIbelieveIcanhelpinthefair.【导语】这是一篇开放作文。要求考生写一篇个人简介，以申请成为教育博览会的志愿者。【详解】1.词汇积累对……感兴趣：beinterestedin→haveaninterestin参加：joinin→takepartin不同的：different→diverse担任：serveas→workas2.句型拓展陈述句变倒装句学科网（北京）股份有限公司 原句：I’minterestedinsciencesubjectsatschoolandenjoydoingsportsafterschool.拓展句：NotonlyamIinterestedinsciencesubjectsatschoolbutalsoIenjoydoingsportsafterschool.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’manoutgoingpersonwhoenjoysteamwork.(运用了who引导的定语从句)[高分句型2]WhenIwasfourteen,IjoinedinasummercampandtouredsomecitiesintheUSA,visitingmanyfamousuniversities.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作状语)[高分句型3]That’swhyIbelieveIcanhelpinthefair.(运用了why引导的表语从句)【真题变式题8】假定你是校英语报ColourfulCampus的记者，请写篇文章介绍你校的年度榜样人物李华。内容包括：1.主要事迹；2.你的看法。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式作答。RoleModeloftheYearofOurSchool__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】RoleModeloftheYearofOurSchoolLiHua,astarstudentfromClass3Grade3,wassingledoutastheRoleModeloftheYearofourschooltheotherday.Heissmartandputslotsofeffortintostudy,winninghimselfprizesincompetitionsandreputationforourschool.Healsotakesanactivepartinsocialpracticeactivities,wherehenotonlydoeshisbitbutalwaysputsforwardcreativeandpracticalideas.Moreover,he’sawillinghelpertohisclassmatesandteachers.Frommyviewpoint,he’shighlyqualifiedforthetitle.Andeveryoneofusshouldfollowhisexampleto学科网（北京）股份有限公司 betterourselves,andevenourschool.【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生写篇文章介绍学校的年度榜样人物李华。内容包括：1.主要事迹；2.你的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累比赛：competition→contest名声：reputation→fame另外：moreover→additionally提出：putforward→comeupwith2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：LiHua,astarstudentfromClass3Grade3,wassingledoutastheRoleModeloftheYearofourschooltheotherday.拓展句：LiHua,whoisastarstudentfromClass3Grade3,wassingledoutastheRoleModeloftheYearofourschooltheotherday.【点睛】[高分句型1]Heissmartandputslotsofeffortintostudy,winninghimselfprizesincompetitionsandreputationforourschool.(运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]Healsotakesanactivepartinsocialpracticeactivities,wherehenotonlydoeshisbitbutalwaysputsforwardcreativeandpracticalideas.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司