如何润饰作文

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如何润饰作文

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22016年广东省全国卷适应性考试第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，负责学校英文广播站。请你给广播站的顾问Dr.Brown写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加广播站十周年庆典。要点如下：1.感谢他的指导；2.告知参加庆典时间和地点；3.邀请他参加庆典并发言。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结语已为你写好。

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5→ontheway/approaching/aroundthecorner.Theweekendiscoming.2.Nowadays,peoplethinkeducationisimportant.3.Ihadagoodidea.→beofgreatimportancevital/crucial/essentialattachgreatimportancetoByusingadvancedwordsandexpressions→Icameupwithagoodidea.Agoodideaoccurredto/struckme.

6Byusingadvancedwordsandexpressions4、Becauseofthegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.5、Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.Thanksto/Owingto/DuetoYou’llhavenotrouble/difficulty(in)findingmyhouse.

72014江西卷假如你是高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“Whattolearninseniorhighschool?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；2.学会做人：真诚，友善；3.学会其他：考生自拟。注意：1.词数100左右；2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinionsonwhattolearninseniorhighschool.______________________________________________Thankyou!

8DraftinsimpleEnglish(Brainstorming)(Beginning)Setatone:Inmyopinion,yourseniorhighschoollifewillbe...(Point1)Howtolearn:…agoodhabit,…methodsdetails:beforeclass,inclass,afterclass(Point2)Getalongwell:be...toclassmates.be...toteachers(Point3)Life:sportsandactivitiesReasons(Ending)Makeawish:Ibelievethatif.....,youwill......

9Adraftwasdone...(Beginning)Inmyopinion,yourseniorhighschoollifewillbedifficult.(Point1)First,youshouldlearntolearnefficiently.Asforme,developingagoodhabitinstudyisimportant.Iusedtotrygoodmethodstoachievemygoals.Itisamustforustopreviewlessons,takeanactivepartinclass,andreviewafterclass.(Point2)Inaddition,youshouldlearntogetalongwellwithdifferentstudents.Ihopeyoucanbefriendlytoclassmatesandrespectfultoourteachers.(Point3)Finally,youshouldjoininsportsandout-of-classactivitiesfrequently.Theywerereallyhelpfultobuildupyourbodyandmakeyourschoollifemorecolorful.(Ending)Ibelievethatifyoutryyourbest,youwillenjoyawonderfullifehere.

10Polishthesewordsandexpressions

11Polishthesewordsandexpressions

12Polishthewordsandphrases(Beginning)Inmyopinion,yourseniorhighschoollifewillbedifficult.(Point1)First,youshouldlearntolearnefficiently.Asforme,developingagoodhabitinstudyisimportant.Iusedtotrygoodmethodstoachievemygoals.Itisamustforustopreviewlessons,takeanactivepartinclass,andreviewafterclass.(Point2)Inaddition,youshouldlearntogetalongwellwithdifferentstudents.Ihopeyoucanbefriendlytoclassmatesandrespectfultoourteachers.(Point3)Finally,youshouldjoininsportsandout-of-classactivitiesfrequently.Theywerereallyhelpfultobuildupyourbodyandmakeyourschoollifemorecolorful.(Ending)Ibelievethatifyoutryyourbesttodothese,youwillenjoyawonderfullifehere.

13PolishedVersionFrommypointofview,yourseniorhighschoollifewillbechallenging.First,youshouldlearntolearnefficiently.Asforme,cultivatingagoodhabitinstudyiscrucial.Iusedtotryeffectivemethodstoachievemygoals.Itisamustforustopreviewlessons,takeanactivepartinclass,andreviewafterclass.Inaddition,youshouldlearntogetalongwellwithstudentswithdifferenttastesandhabits.Ihopeyoucanbefriendlytoclassmatesandrespectfultoourteachers.Finally,youshouldbeactivelyinvolvedinsportsandout-of-classactivitiesfrequently.Theywerereallyhelpfultobuildupyourbodyandmakeyourschoollifemorecolorful.Iamconvincedthatifyousparenoefforttodothese,youwillenjoyafruitful/anunforgettablelifehere.

14summary好文章1.使用较高级的词汇2.使用较丰富的句式3.使用恰当的连接词advancedwordsandphrasesabundantsentencepatternsproperconjunctions

15Homework完成二轮复习资料《名师指津》P196

16Thankyou!