润饰词句增加文采.ppt

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1、高三英语写作指导润饰词句，增加文采DearSirorMadam,Pleaselistentomyhope.I’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.IwanttobeanexchangestudentinEnglandsinceIwasachild.It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.Englandhasmanypalacesandchurches.Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEn

2、glishculture.Icanmakesomefriendswithblueeyesandgoldenhair.Ithinkit’scoolandwonderful.Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthisway.That’smyheartwords.Pleaseconsiderit.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua评点：基本交代清楚了来信目的；没有运用过渡的连接词；表达方式单一，语句欠丰富，基本上没有高级词汇和句型；开头生硬,结尾处汉式英语较严重.高考写作要求：更侧

3、重于“较复杂结构或较高级词汇的应用”以及“语句间的连贯性”，在“要点全”、“表达准”的前提下，做到选词精当、用句精彩、行文精美，力求上层次，出精品。I’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.Iwanttobeanexchangestudent.(一般)I’maseniorschoolgirlwhowantstobeanexchangestudenttoEnglandforoneyear.(高级）It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.(一般)AsEngl

4、ishisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinjob-huntingandcommunication,thereisnodoubtthatbeinganexchangestudentisaneffectivewaytosuccess.(高级）1.使用从句Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.（一般）Itislivingtogetherwiththehostfamilythatcanhel

5、pmegetabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture.（高级）2.使用强调句AndinspiredbytheEnglishculture,I’mwillingtoseizetheopportunitytolivewiththehostfamilytoenrichmyknowledge.（高级）Livingwiththehostfamily,IcanhaveabetterunderstandingofEnglishculture.（高级）3.使用非谓语动词Engl

6、andhasmanypalacesandchurches.（一般）Englandisalsoanancientcountrywithmanyculturalrelicsandfascinatingcastles.（高级）4.使用with的复合结构OnlybystudyingabroadinEnglandcanmyhorizonsbebroadened.（高级）Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthisway.（一般）5.使用倒装句Tobeginwith,goingabroadisth

7、ebestwaytomasteraforeignlanguageassoperfectalearningcircumstanceisoffered.What’smore,itislivingtogetherwiththehostfamilythatcanhelpmegetabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture.Therefore,oneisboundtobenefitalotfromaone-yearstudylikethis.Inaddition,Engla

8、ndisadevelopedcountrywherealotofjobOpportunitiesareinstoreforme.6、使用恰当的连接词ThereasonswhyIaminterestedinitarelistedasfollows.IhopeyoucantakethisintoconsiderationandIwillbeverygratefulifyoucangivemeanearlyreply.Ihaveanitchtovisitplacesofin