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1、智课网IELTS备考资料雅思议论文真题及范文点评：经济发展的利弊摘要：本文虽然免不了有文字上的错误，但是从观点的论证上来看由于引用了非常多的实例而使得经济建设的优缺点都被阐述的相当清楚且掷地有声。而在语言的运用上也基本符合英语文章的Manycountriesaimtoimprovelivingstandardbyeconomicdevelopment,butsomeimportantsocialvaluesarelostasaresult.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofeconomicdevelopmentoutweighthedis
2、advantages?Itisdefinitelytruethateconomicdevelopmentwouldleadtosomeby-productsincludingthelossofsocialvaluesbuttheseproblemscannotcovertheoutstandingachievements.Ithinkadvantagesofeconomicdevelopmentanddisadvantagesofthatwillcoexistforalongtime.Economicprogressisthebasisofallthen
3、ationsintheworld.UnitedStatesisthemostadvancedcountryandthelivingstandardofthepeopleinthatcountryisveryhigh.Thecitizenscouldhavehighlevelofsocialwelfareandtheyenjoyfreemedicalcareandfreeeducation.EventhepoorestpeopleintheStatescouldgetthesocialinsurance,whichensurestheirimpossibi
4、litytogetstarved.TakeChinaasanotherexample.Duringtheyearsofsocialreform,themanufacturingindustryhasbeenimprovedalotandtheinternationaltradeinChinawasvigorous.MostmultinationalcompaniesareinvestinginthecountrysothatthecitizensinChinawouldhavemoreopportunitiestogetagoodjobandtheirl
5、ivingstandardswouldbehigher.Butonethingwecouldnotignoreisthatthesocialvaluesarelosingdaybyday.Especiallyinsomedevelopingcountries,astheyaredevelopingeconomy,someseveresituationswouldoccur.Forexample,insomeAsiancountries,moreandmoreillegalprostitutesappear,whichwouldcatertotheneed
6、sofsomebusinessmen,whowouldusesexasameansofnegotiation.Insomedevelopedcountries,thesamethinghappenedagain.TigerWoodsisatypicalexample.Heisawealthyguy,butheisnotloyaltohiswifeandhehadtheaffairswiththelotsofwomen.TheotherexamplescouldbefoundinNBAeveninthepoliticalworld.BillClinton,
7、theformerpresidentoftheUnitedState,cameacrossthesimilarproblem.Sowecouldgettheideathateconomicaccumulationwouldcausetopeopletoseekotherundesirableexcusetoobtainsatisfaction.Stepbystep,thevaluescouldcollapse.Othersocialvalueshavebeenlostaswell.Forinstance,inthebusinessworld,thecol
8、leaguesarenotcooperativeasbefore;instead
