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1、智课网IELTS备考资料雅思写作：大作文真题点评摘要：以下为雅思大作文的真题，此题为环境问题类别，并且采用报告结构。解题思路：日用消费品生产增加导致了环境污染？东西生产出来了而且造成污染，我觉得主要还是在于到了消费者Anincreaseinproductionofconsumergoodsresultsindamageofthenaturalenvironment.Whatarethecausesandpossiblesolutions?首先理解consumergoods.结合柯林斯Consumergoodsareit

2、emsboughtbypeoplefortheirownuse,ratherthanbybusinesses此题为环境问题类别，并且采用报告结构。可以参考02年06年考过的题目：Manypeoplebelievethatthehumansocietyhasdevelopedintoathrow-awaysociety,whichisfilledwithplasticbagsandrubbish.Whatarethecausesandsolutions?解题思路：日用消费品生产增加导致了环境污染？东西生产出来了而且造成污

3、染，我觉得主要还是在于到了消费者的手里之后发生的变化。1.第一点原因：lowerawarenessofwasteissues---tendtodisposewasteswheneverandwherevertheyconsiderconvenient---aggravatethepollution人们环保意识不高，随意扔垃圾，会造成污染。如何论证：举例子口香糖随地乱扔Tobemorespecific,throwingchewinggumarbitrarilymaycauseeternalpollution.Detail

4、:SidewalkpollutionSeeingapieceofchewinggum,fewpeoplewillpickthatup.Amajorityofpeoplejuststeponit,causingittosticktothesidewalkorsomeone’sshoe,eventuallyleadingtoasidewalkofpollutionrightunderyourownfeetHowtohandlethisproblem?FollowtheexampleofSingaporethatenforc

5、edstricterrulesregulatingthedischargingofrefuse.2)第二点原因Lackqualifiedstaffwhocancopewiththeprocessingofcertainpoisonousmaterialsinconsumergoods,whichmayeventuallycausenaturalcontamination.缺乏可以处理污染源的专业人士。如何论证：举例子Forexample,togutafridgeoneneedstoremovethefoamfirsta

6、ndcaptureozone-depletinggasesforwhicholdfridgesarenotorious.However,theproblemisthatmostpeopleintherecyclingbusiness,exceptthoseindevelopedcountries,don’tknowhowtotackleit.Howtohandlethisproblem背景：ThereareproperautomatedprocessesforfurtherrecyclinginEurope.所以可以建

7、议欧洲国家做如下两件事1.assistpeopleindevelopingcountriesgetfamiliarwiththeprocessingprocedure/providemoreapplicabledevices2.Stopexportingtheirownwasteproblemstodisadvantagedcountriesbecauseofthelackofequivalenttreatmentstandardsthere.以上第二点原因和解决方法笔者参考了BeijingReview第52期中的文章

8、WasteNot。笔者建议大家可以在课后多多关注一些时事杂志，里面有很多相关问题的原因探讨和解决方法。相关字搜索：雅思