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1、浙江新高考作文概要写作summary-writingWhatisasummary?Asummaryisashortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsth,notthedetails.Itisabrief,completeandobjectiverestatementofthemainideaandkeypointsofalongercomposition.本文总共25分,共分为5档第五档(21-25)理解准确,涵盖全部要点。能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成
2、的概要结构紧凑。完全使用自己的言语。4C原则评分标准completecorrectcoherentconcise;nocopyHowtowriteasummary?Step2.Findthetopicsentencesorkeywordsofeachpart.Leaveoutdetailsandreducetheexamples.Recently,awildfishrestaurantwasorderedtoshutdowninHarbin,northeastChina'sHeilongjiangProvince.Asaresult,
3、theowneroftherestaurantfacedafineof500,000yuan.faceaheavyfinewhenwherewhatChenYan,atouristfromChangzhou,eastChina’sJiangsuProvince,complainedonlineonFebruary12thathewasbeingovercharged10,000yuanforthreebigfishatalocalwildfishrestaurantinSongbeiDistrictofHarbin.Worsestil
4、l,heclaimedthathisfamilymemberswerebeatenandthreatenedbytherestaurantstaffwhenhequestionedthebillatthecheckout.Chen’scomplaintimmediatelyspreadonChina’ssocialmedia.Theinvestigationresultsbysomelocalgovernmentdepartmentsshowedthattherestauranthadnofault,sincetheyhadalrea
5、dytaggedtheprice,whichraiseddoubtamongnetizensagain.whowhatFurtherinvestigationshowedthatonetypeofthefishserved,Huso,wasnottherealwildspecies,butakindoffarmedfishatamuchlowerprice.Sincethepricesofthefishdidhaveviolatedtherightsofconsumers,therestaurantgotitsduepunishmen
6、t.Meanwhile,relevantgovernmentdepartmentsthathavestoodbythesideoftherestaurantinthefirstplacewouldalsobeinvestigatedandpunished.whySimilarcasesoffraudulent(欺骗的)pricingatscenicspotshavealsobeenreportedelsewhereinChina.InOctober2015,forinstance,atouristwasoverchargedforac
7、ourseofshrimp(虾)inthecoastalcityofQingdao,eastChina'sShandongProvince,whentherestaurantclaimedthequotedpriceof38yuanwasnotforthedish,butforeachshrimp!Authoritiessaythattheseillegalactionswillbeseverelypunished.howStep3.Organizeyourownpassage.1.Useyourownwords.2.Tobeconc
8、ise.*omitthedetails*reducetheexamples*simplifythedescriptions*eliminateallrepetitions3.Topresenttheinformation