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1、industrialgoods概要写作概要写作Summarywriting高考新题型Summary五步法1.阅读并理解大意,把握文章结构2.找出主题句,要点主题句,关键词。3.用自己的语言整合信息。4.修饰文章使之更有连贯性。5.检查语言,语法,和标点。step3:Ourindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildren.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnow.Whenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewi
2、llstarttotakecareofwhatwehave.Butwhycan’tweactbeforethishappens?Whycan’twetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue?1.后果+2.措施1.Thiswastefulness_______________________nowbecausewehavenoresourcesleft.hasbroughtusgreattrouble2.Weshouldtakeimmediateactiontostopwa
3、stingresources..(信息整合)hascausedgreattroubleforusstep4.连贯性Inthepast,industrialgoodsweremadetofunctionwellforalongtimeandtheywereveryexpensive.Nowadays,productscannotlastlong.Peopleprefertothrowitawayratherthanrepairit,whichhasledtoagreatwasteofearth’sresources.ThisWasteful
4、nesshascausedgreattroubleforusnowbecausewehavenoresourcesleft.Weshouldtakeimmediateactionstostopwastingresources.However,Therefore,Step5.检查Inthepast,industrialgoodsweremadetofunctionwellforalongtimeandtheywereveryexpensive.However,productsNowadayscannotlastlong.Peoplepref
5、ertothrowitawayratherthanrepairit,whichhasledtoagreatwasteofearth’sresources.ThisWastefulnesshascausedgreattroubleforusnowbecausewehavenoresourcesleft.Therefore,weshouldtakeimmediateactiontostopwastingresources.Decadesago,industrialgoodswereofhighqualityandcostalot.(要点1)B
6、utthisisnotagoodideatomanufacturers.过渡句Theyadvisedustothrowthemawayratherthanrepairthem,whichhascausedagreatwasteoftheworld’sresources.(要点2)Thiswastefulnesshasbroughtusgreattrouble.Nowwearerunningoutofresources.Therefore,weshouldactimmediatelytosavewhatwehavebeforeit’stoo
7、late.(要点3)69WModelessayWritingskillsSkill2:Rewritesentences.Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Sometimeago,manufacturersmadeindustrialgoodslastforever.改变语态(主动——被动)2.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintogreattrouble.Wehavegotintogreattroubleduetothiswastefulness.改变主
8、语(人——物)3.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Tothrowthemawayischeaperthantorepairthem.Iti