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1、读后续写1.原文一致原则内容要前后衔接，上下连贯语言表达风格一致。2.正能量原则故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。3.曲折性原则凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。写作指导三大原则四个步骤1342读懂大意，理清脉络读所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。细读首句，构思框

2、架仔细阅读所给两段的首句，结合正能量结尾，思考大致框架。修改润色，整洁誊写思考再三，把修正润色后的续写整洁地写入答卷。增加细节，开始写作依据情节发和常识，在确定的框架内，可按“所见/遇所想，所为所感”等构思具体细节。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。读后续写TheMake-upGuyDavewasamake-up(化妆)artistwhoregularlyheldmakeupartistryclassesatthelocalcommuni

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6、ndsuchawomanclass?Whocoulditbe?Doubtslikethiscamecrowdingin.Thecommunitycollegewasplacedinaremoteruralarea,whichwaswhytheotherparticipantswerequitedoubtfuloftheman’sintentions.Throughoutthelessons,ignoringthecuriouswomenaroundhim,themancarefullylisteneda

7、ndwroteeverythingdownhelearned,leavingthewomenmoreandmorecuriousandpuzzled.Whenthedayandclasswereslowlycomingtoanend,thegossipingwomensimplycouldnothidetheircuriosityanylonger,fortheyknewitwastimetoremovetheirdoubts,otherwise?Finally,oneofthemcouldn’tres

8、isthercuriosity,soshepickedupthecourageandaskedhimwhyhewassointerestedinmake-upartistry.Whatfollowedwasadeadsilence.Afterwhatseemedacentury,heslowlyopenedhismouthandherecamethemostinspiringbeautifulreply.Paragraph1:Hesaidh