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1、Composition1DigitalTVTelevisionhasalreadypresentedavividworldinfrontofthepeople.Andnow,withthedevelopmentofmodernsciences,anewtypeofTV—digitalTVhastakentheplaceoftraditionalTV.Itnotonlyplaystheroleoftheold-fashionedcolorTV,butalsochallengestheoldwaysofTVstationbroadcastingprogramsandtheviewersreceiv
2、ing.Forexample,oneex-changedigitalTVhasonepartofthescreenwhichcanshowamenu,likenews,TVprogramschedule,networketc,whilepeoplecanwatchtheordinaryTVprogramsatthesametime.DigitalTVcanalsoplayrolesofprogram-picking-up,advertisement-choosing,gameexchangeplay,internetonline,shopping-on-TV,electric-commerci
3、alTV,remoteTVeducationprogram,remoteTVmedicalcare,longdistanceworkingoffice,TVbankingsystem,visualtelephone,andTV-conference,etc.AlthoughdigitalTVwillbeverypopularinthenearfuture,andpeoplewillbenefitalotfromit,itwillalsobeverybeneficialtotheTVproducers.TheTVbuyerswillpaymoreandspendmoretimeinfrontof
4、thenewtoy.AlsosomepeoplewouldcommitsomenewkindsofTVcrimesonthem.ThesolutionistorestrictthedarksideandbroadenthebrightsideofthemoderndigitalTV.Composition2CET-4作文评分样卷题目:MyIdealJob样卷12分——条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。.Thereareallkindsofjobonworld.Sopeoplehavedifferentidealtojob.Theteachertoldmet
5、hatshouldhaveaidealjobwhenI’machild.SoIchoicemyidealjobinallkindsofjob.Myidealjobisbecomeaeconomicer.Becauseeveryonehaveitselfthink.Sotheiridealjobisdifferent.Ichoicethejobbecauseitfittome.Thisjobhavemoremoney.Thisisreal.But,ituselesstoourcountryimportant.Ourcountryisadevelopingcountry,needeconomice
6、rverymuch.So,Ichoicethisjob.Myidealjobisbecomeaeconomicer,soImustylearneconomicknowledgeworkhard.Learnknowledgefromteacherintheclass.Learnknowledgefrommyselfafterclass.Lookatbookabouteconomic.Readyformyidealjob.usemyknowledyabouteconomicinpractis.Becomearealuselessmen.样卷25分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性较差。有较多的严
7、重语言错误。Therearealotofjob,suchasteacher,work,doctor,nurse,driverandsoon.People’sidealjobaredifficutly.Somewanttobeateacher,teachalotofstudents,somewanttobeabus-driver,helpotherpeoplegotheplacewheretheyi