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1、四级作文评分标准2分：条理不清，思路混乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性性差，有较多严重的语言错误。8分：基本切题，有些地方思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，句型结构形式单一；语言错误较多，其中一些是严重的错误。11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，运用丰富的句型结构（从句，倒装句，虚拟语气，分词，非谓语动词）但有少量语言错误。14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误，仅个别小错（仅仅由于笔误而造成的不超过1-2处错误）。注意：不够120词，每10词扣1分作文题目：RecreationalA
2、ctivities1．娱乐活动多种多样2．娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性3．作为大学生我的看法RecreationalActivitiesRecreationalActivitiesbringusmanyfun.Ifwearetired,wehavesomerecreationalactivities.Collegestudenthavemanyrecreationalactivitiesbecausetheyareinterestedinthem.Somestudentlikefootball,basketballandsoon.It’sgoodforthe
3、m.Somecollegestudentlikemovie,musicwiththeirfriendsiftheyarefree.Otherstudentswillgoforatripinsummerandspringholidaywhentheydon’tgotoschool.Theycanseealotofbeautifulplacestomakethemknowmoreinformationofothercities.Ithinkit’sverygoodtohaverecreationalactivitiesforcollegestudentsbecauseth
4、eseactivitiescanletthemhaveamorecolorfulcampuslife,andwillnotfeelveryboring.RecreationalActivitiesRecreationalactivitieswillbringusmanyfuns.Asweknow,collegestudyisverytiredandbored.Weshouldhavesomerecreationalactivities.Asforme,collegestudentscanhavemanyrecreationalactivities.Forexample
5、,wecanhaveparties,barbecuesorpicnics,whichbringusendlessinterest.Secondly,manystudentsliketoplayfootball,basketballandsoon.Thesegamesaregoodforbody.Moreover,othercollegestudentschoosewatchingmoviesorconcertswithfriendswhentheyhavetime.Atthesametime,manycollegestudentsgototravelinholiday
6、s.Whentraveled,theycangetalot.Lastyear,IwenttoHuangMountainwithmyfriends.Thesceneryaresobeautiful.Thereareoftenmanyclouds,sotheweatherisverycool.Ihaveagoodtime,andIamveryhappy.本文之所以只得到5分，除了出现一些语法错误之外，在很大程度上是因为结构问题。1．文章结构不完整。文章首段直接表达个人观点，接着主要列举了大学生经常进行的各种娱乐活动，而对于活动对人受益和危害性基本没有涉及到。2．文章结构不
7、合理。第2，3段讲述的都是大学生经常进行的活动，应该合并为一段，否则会显得很松散。3．文章主题有些偏离。最后提到作者游览黄山的经历，偏离“娱乐活动”的主题。4．文章详略安排不当。文章用了大量笔墨描述多种多样的娱乐活动，但是第2，3点提纲几乎没有涉及到。RecreationalActivitiesInpeople’sdailylife,therearevariousrecreationalactivities.Theseactivitiesbringpeoplemanybenefitsandatthesametime,itbringmanybadthi
