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1、Score15:EffectiveCommunicationwithAccuraciesThewritingeffectivelyaddressesthewritingtask.Itdemonstratesawelldevelopedlogicalorganizationalstructurewithclearlystatedmainideasandsufficientsupportingdetails.Ithasalmostnoerrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,anditdisplaysanadequateabilitytouse
2、thelanguageappropriately.Nodifficultyisexperiencedbythereader.WillPhonesKillLetterWriting?Thereseemstobeafashionnowadays,especiallyamongtheyoungpeople,tophoneeachothermoreoftenthanwriteletters,whichhasbeenthetraditionalwayofcommunicationsincetheearlypartofhumanhistory.Nevertheless,Idonotsidewiththei
3、deathatphonesaregoingtokillletterwriting.Foronething,asthemainmethodofcommunicationformostpartofthehistory,letter-writinghasalotofadvantagesovertheproductofmodemtechology一thephone.Time-consumingasitmaybe,itconveysone'sfeelingsandemotionsmuchmoresincerelyandcompletelythanthephonedoes.Theinstantexcitm
4、entcausedbyacallcanneverbeinapositiontorivalthespontaneousjoywhenreadingaletterfromadevotedfriend.Foranother,althoughthephoneisbeingputintomorefrequentuse,inmanycasesaformalorinformalletter,ratherthanashortcall,isrequired.Forinstance,nobodywouldconsideritappropriatetoinviteadistinguishedguesttoacere
5、monybysimplygivinghimacall.Insuchcircumstances,theonlyandthebestchoicewouldbenootherthantowritealetterofinvitation.However,Iamnotsuggestingthatweshouldabandonthephoneforletterwriting.Actually,theyarebothimportanttousandneitherwillkilltheother.Diversityofthecommunicationmeansisjustthereflectionoftheh
6、ugeprogressofhumancivilization.Score14-12:GoodCommunicationwithFewInaccuraciesThewritingadequatelyaddressesalmostallofthewritingtask,thoughitdealswithsomepartsmoreeffectivelythanothers.Itdemonstratesagenerallywelldevelopedlogicalorganizationalstructurewithmainideasandsupportingdetails.Ithasrelativel
7、yfewsignificanterrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,anditdisplaysanabilitytousethelanguageappropriately.Verylittledifficultyisexperiencedbythereader.(1)Phonesisasymbolofmoderncivilizationan