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1、Score15:EffectiveCommunicationwithAccuraciesThewritingeffectivelyaddressesthewritingtask.Itdemonstratesawelldevelopedlogicalorganizationalstructurewithclearlystatedmainideasandsufficientsupportingdetails.Ithasalmostnoerrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,anditdisplaysan
2、adequateabilitytousethelanguageappropriately.Nodifficultyisexperiencedbythereader.WillPhonesKillLetterWriting?Thereseemstobeafashionnowadays,especiallyamongtheyoungpeople,tophoneeachothermoreoftenthanwriteletters,whichhasbeenthetraditionalwayofcommunicationsincetheearlypartofhuma
3、nhistory.Nevertheless,Idonotsidewiththeideathatphonesaregoingtokillletterwriting.Foronething,asthemainmethodofcommunicationformostpartofthehistory,letter-writinghasalotofadvantagesovertheproductofmoderntechology—thephone.Time-consumingasitmaybe,itconveysone’sfeelingsandemotionsmu
4、chmoresincerelyandcompletelythanthephonedoes.Theinstantexcitmentcausedbyacallcanneverbeinapositiontorivalthespontaneousjoywhenreadingaletterfromadevotedfriend.Foranother,althoughthephoneisbeingputintomorefrequentuse,inmanycasesaformalorinformalletter,ratherthanashortcall,isrequir
5、ed.Forinstance,nobodywouldconsideritappropriatetoinviteadistinguishedguesttoaceremonybysimplygivinghimacall.Insuchcircumstances,theonlyandthebestchoicewouldbenootherthantowritealetterofinvitation.However,Iamnotsuggestingthatweshouldabandonthephoneforletterwriting.Actually,theyare
6、bothimportanttousandneitherwillkilltheother.Diversityofthecommunicationmeansisjustthereflectionofthehugeprogressofhumancivilization.Score14-12:GoodCommunicationwithFewInaccuraciesThewritingadequatelyaddressesalmostallofthewritingtask,thoughitdealswithsomepartsmoreeffectivelythano
7、thers.Itdemonstratesagenerallywelldevelopedlogicalorganizationalstructurewithmainideasandsupportingdetails.Ithasrelativelyfewsignificanterrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,anditdisplaysanabilitytousethelanguageappropriately.Verylittledifficultyisexperiencedbythereader
8、.(1)Phonesisasymbolofmoderncivilizationa