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1、writing1.审题(1-2mins)2.构思提纲(3-5mins,确定主题)3.写文章(20mins)4.修改检查(5mins)写作概述StepsPre-writing:仔细阅读题干,确定写作主题Para.1:describethepicture简要描述漫画(who,what,when,where…)开门见山TIPS:1.写作的directions部分虽然给出了大致的主题,但是也要求考生对漫画进行描述,切忌抛开漫画内容直接议论!!!TIPS:2.漫画的内容一定要符合图片,切忌无中生有!!!Para2:全文的核心段giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenonco
2、nveyedinthepictureandinterpretitsmeaning/message揭示主题(观点)并加以解释和说明论证;揭示现象(问题)并阐述现象(问题)产生的原因。TIPS:可以从2-3个方面进行阐述,也可以将这部分分为两段。Para3.:giveyourconclusion.(a)提出建议,重申观点主题句(b)对如何解决漫画中所反映的问题提出合理建议或总结观点。TIPS:主题句的复述不是简单地重复,通常需符合如果在段末,用强调词转换方式连接。与主题句保持意思一致,更进一层。转换方式:词对应,同根,逆向实例一看图作文的解题思路应用1.审题(认真阅读写作提示):漫画信息“
3、focusonthetopicaboutmakingalifeplanandexplainwhyitisimportantforyoungpeopletodo”确定写作主题:年轻人应该做好人生规划以及人生规划的重要性的原因2.作文提纲(结构)第一段:简要描写图画内容(who,what,when,where…):爷爷教导孙子:如果年老的时候写自传,你会看到自己去过哪里,(whereyouhavebeen)如果年轻时候写,你就会知道你将去哪里(willseewhereyouaregoing)。Thepicturedepictsayoungmansittinginfrontofacomput
4、erandtypingsomethingwithhisgrandfatherstandingbehind.Thecaptionbelowsays,“Whenyouwriteyourautobiographyinoldage,you’llseewhereyouhavebeen,butwhenyouwriteyourautobiographyatayoungage,you’llseewhereyou’regoing.”Itrevealsprofoundlythatyoungpeopleshouldshapetheirownfutureandmaketheirownlifeplans,whi
5、chiscosistentwithwhatIadvocate.第二段:解释图画深刻含义(揭示主题)并加以解释和说明论证。Firstly,planningyourlifehelpsyousetupspecificlifegoalsandfollowthroughonyourgoals.Whenyouhavespecificgoals,you’remorelikelytobeself-motivated.Secondly,lifeplanninghelpsyouhaveafullunderstandingofyourlifedeficienciesandmakepromptadjustme
6、nts.Ifyoufailsomeofyourlifegoals,youcanre-examineyourlifeplananddecidewhethertomakemoreeffortstofulfillthosegoalsorchangesomeofyourgoals.Lastbutnotleast,youcanmeetmanynewopportunitiesaftersomeofyourlifeplanscometrue,becausesuccessbreedsmoresuccessandopportunitiesbringinmoreopportunities.第三段:给出自己
7、的看法(总结全文,强调正确的做法)。Tosumup,itisquiteessentialforyoungpeopleespeciallytheuniversitystudentstomakelifeplanearlysoastofacethechallegingsconfidentlyaftergraduations.Whatweshoulddoistotakeactionsimmediately,includingchoosingcoreco