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1、Writing(CET-4)Olivia历年真题范文欣赏习作基础技能模拟话题&范文经典句型摘抄★IntroductionCreatingaGreenCampusInthelastfewyears,environmentalpollutionhasbecomethefocusofpublicattention.Manyuniversitieshavetakeneffectivemeasurestobuildgreencampuses.Obviously,ithasBeenrealizedthatcreatingagreencampusisextremelyimportant.Actually,c
2、reatingagreencampuscontainsnotonlybuildingaBeautifulcampusenvironment,butalsofosteringastrongsenseofenvironmentalprotection.Youngpeoplearethebackboneofnation-building.Thus,onlyiftheydevelopthesenseofenvironmentalprotectioncantheybuildagreencountryinthefutureandcontributetheirknowledgeandenergytothes
3、ociety.★ModelstoshareTherefore,asuniversitystudents,weshouldplayanactiveroleintheactionsofbuildingagreenhomeland.First,weshouldalwaysbearsavingresourcesinmind.Forexample,turnoffthewatertapafterusingit.Second,weshouldassumeourresponsibilitiestospreadthespiritsoastocalluponmorepeopletojoininthispromis
4、ingproject.注意闪光词汇★BasicwritingskillsWritingfailures1Checkingstandard2words&phrases3Writingmodels4学生作文中经常出现的错误：标题单词拼写、大小写、标点符号随心所欲词语搭配张冠李戴句子时态混乱，主谓不一致非谓语动词短语作状语时，逻辑主语和主句主语不一致从句滥用分数等级评分标准2分条理不清，思路混乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多为严重错误。5分基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重的语言错误。8分基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误较多，其中一些是严重错误。11分
5、切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。英语写作高分秘诀:主题切题＋段落连贯＋语言生动1．句式要有变化①复合句、并列句②倒装句（1）虚拟语气中if省略（2）only+状语置于句首（3）否定词置于句首（4）地点副词置于句首③强调句型Itis……that(who)…④非谓语动词。⑤虚拟语气⑥固定句型结构too…to…so…that…sucha…that…notonly…butalso…neither…nor…suchas…not…until…sothat…either…or…2．用词面广，遣词造句得当3.使用连接
6、词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，一气呵成。列举：1.forthefirstpoint,first,inthefirstplace,firstly,firstofall2.forthesecondpoint,second,secondly,again,andthen,furthermore,inaddition,moreover,3.forthelastpoint,last,finally,lastly,lastbutnotleast并列关系：and,aswellas,notonly…butalso,likewise,alike…递进关系：also,besides,inaddition,furtherm
7、ore,moreover,what’smore,mostimportantly…转折关系：but,yet,whereas,while,however,although,otherwise,still,inspiteof,despite,insteadof,nevertheless,nonetheless…时间顺序：while,when,soonafter,before,afterward,fina
