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1、FourthStepinEssayWritingLearnhowto…RevisesothatyoursentencesflowsmoothlyEditsothatyoursentencesareerror-freeRevisingSentencesUseParalellismWordsinapairorseriesshouldhaveaparallelstructureBalanced-ingNonparallelMyjobincludescheckingtheinventory,initialingtheorders,andtocallthesuppliersParallel
2、Myjobincludescheckingtheinventory,initiallytheorders,andcallingthesuppliers.CheckingInitialingCallingBalanceddescriptionsNonparallelThegameshowcontestantwastoldtobecheerful,charmingandwithenthusiasm.ParallelThegameshowcontestantwastoldtobecheerful,charming,andenthusiastic.CheerfulCharmingEnth
3、usiasticBalancedtoverbsNonparallelGrandmotherlikestoreadmysterynovels,todoneedlepoint,andbrowsingtheinternetatherhomecomputer.ParallelGrandmotherlikestoreadmysterynovels,todoneedlepoint,andtobrowsetheinternetatherhomecomputer.BalancedverbsNonparallelWepaintedthetriminthelivingroom;thewallpape
4、rwasputupbyaprofessional.ParallelWepaintedthetriminthelivingroom;aprofessionalputupthewallpaper.Activity,Page102ConsistentPointofViewConsistencywithVerbsDonotshiftverbtensesunnecessarilyConsistencywithPronounsDonoshiftyourpointofviewunnecessarily.Activity,Page105.UseSpecificWordsGeneral:Shewa
5、lkeddownthestreet.Animalscameintotheplace.Themansignedthepaper.UseSpecificWordsSpecific:AnnewanderedslowlyalongRogersLane.Hungrylionspaddedsilentlyintothearena.Thebiologyteacherquicklyscribbledhisnameonthecoursewithdrawalslip.UseSpecificWordsUseexactnames.Uselivelyverbs.Usedescriptivewordsbef
6、orenouns.Usewordsthatrelatetothesenses—sight,hearing,taste,smell,touch.UseSpecificWordsActivity1,Page108.UseActiveVerbsPassiveThecomputerwasturnedonbyHakim.Thecar’sairconditionerwasfixedbythemechanic.ActiveHakimturnedonthecomputer.Themechanicfixedthecar’sairconditioner.UseConciseWordsWordines
7、s—usingmorewordsthannecessarytoexpressmeaning—isoftenasignoflazyorcarelesswriting.UseConciseWordsSeepage111.Activity,page112.VaryYourSentencesEditingSentencesSentenceSkillsWritecompletesentencesratherthanfragments.Donotwriterun-ons.Useverbfor
