Writing in CET-4

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1、WritinginCET-4What’sagoodessayinCET-4?Howtogenerateideas?Howtowritealogicalessay?Howtowritecorrectly?四级作文评分标准2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯

2、性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。Canyougradetheseessays?Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledLimitingtheUseofPlasticBags.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow一次性塑料袋曾广为使用由此带来的问题限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义1----2分2----14

3、分3----8分4----11分5----5分HereishowtheyaregradedinCET-4.Isyourassessmentcorrect?主语缺失1)Inourcountryfeelsveryfree.2)Inmyhometownaren’tverybusy.词性混淆(非名词主语)1)Richdoesn’tensureahappylife.2)Keeptwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.多重谓语1)Inourmodernsociety,therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowthat

4、manypeoplearecheated.2)Povertymakesmanypeoplecan’tstudyabroad.非动词谓语1)Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersagainstit2)Itissaidthattheplaceworthstouring.时态性数不配合1)IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachmeCollegeEnglish.2)Iuseadiskbecauseitholdplentyofdata.代词偷梁换柱1)Animportantthingforthestudenttorem

5、emberisthatwhenwritingapaper,youshouldnotplagiarize.2)Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.形容词副词混淆1)Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferently.2)Surprisingenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.搭配不当1).Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassoexp

6、ensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.2)Crowdedtrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.8pointsWeallhavesuchexperience:afterwewenttothesupermarket,wealwaysgetsomeplasticbags.Eventhedisposableplasticbagspolluteourenvironment,fewofuscanrefusetogetplasticbags,becausewear

7、euseduseit.Withtheflyingdevelopingofeconomic,thedisposableplasticbagsaremorewideused.Butourenvironmentcan’tstandbytheheavypollution.Thedisposableplasticbagswillexistmanyyears,maybetheplasticbagswhichyoueverusedwouldstillbetherewhenyouhaveagrandson.Soitnotonlyeffectourlifebutalsohu

8、rtourafterspring.Sothegovernments