初中英语《书面表达讲评》教学课件.ppt

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1、书面表达讲评三门中学黄敏假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’sRideBicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbonlife）;节能(energysaving)注意：1.词数：120字左右演讲开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone,IamLiHuafromXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let’sRideBicycles”…Goo

2、dmorning,everyone,IamLiHuafromXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let’sRideBicycles”.Asisknowtous,withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,carshavebecomeapopularwayoftransport,whileittakesomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.Mostpeopleknewwhatisthelow-carbonlife,butwhypeoplestillpoll

3、uteenviroment?Inmyoppion,usethebiketoworkinsteadcarisagoodwaytosaveenergy.Besides,usethebikecanmakeourbodymorestronger.Ihopeeveryoneintheearthshouldtakeactiontoimprovesituation.whynottodoit?分段时态拼写语法影响给分的主要因素：文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装文靠词装PolishingA.WordsandexpressionsB.SentencepatternsC.Linkingwords

4、andphrases2、词组优先原则4、弃旧取新原则A.Wordsandexpressions四项基本原则1、地道原则四项基本原则1、地道原则四项基本原则2、词组优先原则1、地道原则四项基本原则2、词组优先原则四项基本原则4、弃旧取新原则四项基本原则4、弃旧取新原则3、同义多样原则四项基本原则1、地道原则［原文］Drivingcarshastakensomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.[improve]Drivingcarshascaused/ledto/resultedinmanyproblemssuchasair

5、pollutionandtrafficjams.2、词组优先原则［原文］Ridingbicyclescanhelpusprotectenvironment.[improve]Bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheydon’tproduceharmfulgases.3、同义多样原则［原文］Ridingbicyclesisgoodforourhealth.［improve］1.Wecanbenefitfromridingbicycles.2.Ridingbicyclesisbeneficialtoourhealth.4、弃旧

6、取新原则[原文]Withthequickdevelopmentofeconomy,…[improve]Witheconomyprogressinginaflash,…twowheels一、肯定不如双否好二、陈述不如倒装巧三、单句不如复句妙四、从句不如短语傲B.Sentencepatterns四个“不如”[原文]Itisagoodchoiceforustoridebicycles.[improve]Thereisnodoubt/denyingthatridingbicycleisawisechoice.Wecannotemphasize(强调)theimportanceo

7、fprotectingenvironmenttoomuch.[translation]再…也不为过一、肯定不如双否好(doublenegative)[原文]weshouldtakeactiontoimproveourcurrentsituation…[improve]Onlybytakingactionshouldweimproveourcurrentsituation...二、陈述不如倒装巧(inversion)[原文]carshavebecomeapopularwayoftransport.Itbringsusconveniencet