书面表达讲评与指导.ppt

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1、书面表达练习讲评暨写作技巧指导Whatmakesagoodcomposition?5分6分21分21分Whatmakesagoodcomposition?1.Goodhandwriting假设你是李华，你写信给Annie寻求帮助，具体内容如下：你家附近有一家工厂，经常倾倒垃圾到河里，污染水资源，导致饮用水不安全；还排放有毒气体，影响人们健康。你想叫他们停止排放污水和有毒气体，但是因为你父亲是该公司的经理，这样做会使他失去工作。他已经向当地人道歉并且赔款，你想原谅他，但是你又认为父亲工厂排污做得不对。你该怎么

2、办。请以此为内容写一封英文求助信，字数80-100字。Isthefollowingagoodpassage?DearAnnie,Thereisafactorynearmyhome.Itoftenpoursthewasteintotheriver.Thiscausesunsafedrinkingwater.Itgivesoutpoisonousgases.Ithasabadeffectonthepeople’shealth.Ican’tstandseeingthis.Iwanttoaskthemtocutba

3、ckontheproduction.Ialsowanttostopthemfromgivingoutwastewaterandpoisonousgases.However,myfatheristhemanagerofthefactory.Thiswillmakehimlosehisjob.Hehasapologizedtothelocalpeopleforthisandgiventhemsomemoney.Iwanttoforgivehim,butIdon’tthinkheisright.Whatshoul

4、dIdo?DearAnnie,Thereisafactorynearmyhome.Itoftenpoursthewasteintotheriver.Thiscausesunsafedrinkingwater.Itgivesoutpoisonousgases.Ithasabadeffectonthepeople’shealth.Ican’tstandseeingthis.Iwanttoaskthemtocutbackontheproduction.Ialsowanttostopthemfromgivingou

5、twastewaterandpoisonousgases.However,myfatheristhemanagerofthefactory.Thiswillmakehimlosehisjob.Hehasapologizedtothelocalpeopleforthisandgiventhemsomemoney.Iwanttoforgivehim,butIdon’tthinkheisright.WhatshouldIdo?Whatmakesagoodcomposition?1.Goodhandwriting2

6、.ProperparagraphstructuresDearAnnie,Thereisafactorynearmyhome.Itoftenpoursthewasteintotheriver.Itgivesoutpoisonousgases.Thiscausesunsafedrinkingwater.Ithasabadeffectonthepeople’shealth.Ican’tstandseeingthis.Iwanttoaskthemtocutbackontheproduction.Ialsowantt

7、ostopthemfromgivingoutwastewaterandpoisonousgases.I’mwritingtoyouforyouradvice.However,asmyfatheristhemanagerofthefactory,thiswillmakehimlosejob.Hehasapologizedtothelocalpeopleforthisandgiventhemsomemoney.Iwanttoforgivehim,butIdon’tthinkheisright.Whatshoul

8、dIdo?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.yours,LiHuaWhatmakesagoodcomposition?1.Goodhandwriting2.Properparagraphstructures3.Goodbeginningandending.4.Thefewererrors,thebetterIreallydon’tknowwhatshouldIdo.Ishoul