高二 书面表达讲评与指导.ppt

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1、书面表达练习讲评暨写作技巧指导Whatmakesagoodcomposition?1.Goodhandwriting2.Thefewererrors,thebetterIreallydon’tknowwhatshouldIdo.Ishould1.句子结构问题Thereisafactorywhichnearmyhome.is我学到的写作技巧NO.1注意句子_____的正确搭配结构Hehasalreadyapologizedtothepeopleforwhathehaddoneandgave/givesomemo

2、neytothem.givendid2.谓语动词形式问题Thewastewasterwasfloweddirectlyintotheriver.flowsThathaveresultedinunsafedrinkingwater.has我学到的写作技巧NO.2注意谓语动词的形式---_____、_____、_______语态单复数时态3.词汇用法问题。Italwayspushes/pulls/flowswasteintotheriversandgivesoutpoisonousgases.poursIsugg

3、estthemcutbackonproduction.theySuggest(建议)+n.(that)+_____+________（_________）+动名词主语(should)do宾格/所有格them/theircutting王老师建议我们买本英语字典。MrZhaosuggestedthatwe(should)buyanEnglishdictionary.MrZhaosuggestedus/ourbuyingan…causesunsafedrinkingwatermakesThefactoryoften

4、pourslotsofwasteintotheriver,whichcausesthedrinkingwaterunsafe.causesth.causesb.sth.causesb.todo…causesdrinkingwatertobeunsafeIfIdoso,he’lllosshisjob.losen.Iwanttoforgiveforhim.forgivemeforgivesb.fordoing…Itmakesbad/harmfuleffectsonpeople’shealth.has/brings

5、aboutLookingthese,Ican’tstandwithwhattheydo.seeingputupwith我学到的写作技巧NO.3注意用词的________适当使用_______词汇较高级准确性Isthefollowingagoodpassage?DearAnnie,Thereisafactorynearmyhome.Itoftenpoursthewasteintotheriver.Thiscausesunsafedrinkingwater.Itgivesoutpoisonousgases.Ith

6、asabadeffectonthepeople’shealth.Ican’tstandseeingthis.Iwanttoaskthemtocutbackontheproduction.Ialsowanttostopthemfromgivingoutwastewaterandpoisonousgases.However,myfatheristhemanagerofthefactory.Thiswillmakehimlosehisjob.Hehasapologizedtothelocalpeopleforthi

7、sandgiventhemsomemoney.Iwanttoforgivehim,butIdon’tthinkheisright.WhatshouldIdo?Toimproveourwriting1Onlycorrectsentencesarenotenough.▲DearAnnie,Thereisafactorynearmyhome.Itoftenpoursthewasteintotheriver.Thiscausesunsafedrinkingwater.Itgivesoutpoisonousgases.

8、Ithasabadeffectonthepeople’shealth.Ican’tstandseeingthis.Iwanttoaskthemtocutbackontheproduction.Ialsowanttostopthemfromgivingoutwastewaterandpoisonousgases.However,myfatheristhemanagerofthefactory.This