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1、JamesWhitefuture?第七单元Writing写作课授课人：徐新芸A:Whatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrowup?B:Iwanttobea/an…whenIgrowup.A:Wherewillyoulive?B:Iwilllive…A:Howwillyougotowork?B:Iwillgotowork…A:What…?B:...A:Where…?B:…A:How…?B:…以MyLifeinTwentyYears为题目写一篇作文。请你从职业，居住地，出行以及业余活动描述

2、你二十年后的生活状况。要求：1.句子结构完整，条理清晰，文体规范。2.80词左右。习作练习1.判断文体：记叙文3.思考方向：2.判断时态：一般将来时按照合理的逻辑顺序描述begoingto...will...in20yearsactressBeijingBysubwayTakeactinglessonsMakefriends,keepadogMyLifeinTwentyYearsIwanttobeanactressintwentyyears.IwillliveinBeijing.Iwillgoto

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4、：Whatdoyouthinkyourlifewillbelikeintwentyyears?Iwillbeanactress.词句点题句topicsentenceReasons(Why…)2SmallT.S.20归纳：探讨一：思想的小火花1：思想的小火花2：Whatdoyouthinkyourlifewillbelikeintwentyyears?Iwillbeanactress.Ilikewatchingmovies.Thejobisinteresting.词句点题句topicsentence

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6、ution.3SmallT.S.reasons20词句探讨四：思想的小火花1：思想的小火花2：思想的小火花3：IfIamanactress,Iwilldomanythings.I’mgoingtotakeactinglessons.I’mgoingtomakealotoffriends.3SmallT.S.I’mgoingtokeepadog.reasons20Ending(结尾):Iwilltrymybesttomakemydreamcometrue.20Whatdoyouthinkyourli

7、fewillbelikeintwentyyears?.Iwilltrymybesttomakemydreamcometrue.点题，说明来意小表结明全观文点45Iwillbeanactress.Ilikewatchingmovies.Thejobisinteresting.IwillliveinBeijing.Beijingisthemostpopularcity.Therewillbemorejobsinthatcity.Iwillgotoworkbysubway.Takingsubwayisq

8、uickandcheap,althoughit’scrowded.Itcanmakelesspollution.IfI’manactress,Iwilldomanythings.I’mgoingtotakeactinglessons.I’mgoingtokeepadog.I’mgoingtomakemanyfriends.in20yearsIwillbeanactress.Ilikewatchingmovies.Thejobisinteresting.IwillliveinBeij