英语写作教学设计的理论和实践.ppt

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1、英语写作教学设计的理论和实践北京工业大学附中孔彬写作教学BeginningtoWrite情景作文试题（满分20分）最近你的同班同学上课总是睡觉，严重影响了学习。请你给他（她）写一封信,劝说他（她）改掉这个不良习惯。上课睡觉会导致学生成绩下降，并影响老师的心情和思维。同时你对他的学习生活提出自己的建议。写作提示：按着要求：发现问题—列出原因—改进方法这一结构，有理有据地描写全文。句与句之间要连贯，并正确地使用动词及词组。写作教学评价的命题Dearfriend：I’msorrybutIhavetosayt

2、hatthereexistsaseriousprobleminyourstudyhabit.Recentlyyouarealwaysfallingasleepinclass.Idon’tknowwhyyouarebehavinglikethisbutobviouslyitisveryharmfultoyourstudybecauseyouhavefallenbehindotherfellowstudents.Inmyopinion,thereareseveralreasonstoshowthatyou

3、rbehaviorisnotproper.First,thereisnoneedtosaythatfallingasleepinclassisbadforyourstudyforyouwillmisswhattheteachersay.What’smore,itshowsdisrespectfortheteachertofallasleepinclass.Lastbutnotleast,youhavetoconsiderwhatyourfellowstudentswillthinkandhowthey

4、willfeel.写作教学范例评分Asyourclosefriend,I’dliketogiveyousomesuggestions.Inordertokeepawakeinclass,youshoulddevelopahealthysleepinghabit,anddon’tstayuptoolate.Andconcentrateonwhattheteacherissayingandtrytoforgetyoursleepiness.Ireallyhopeyoucangetridofyourbadh

5、abit,andbeanenergeticstudentinclass.Yoursincerely,Tom写作教学范例评分共190个单词Alotofmyfriendsworryabouttheenvironment.Theyfeeltheycan’tdoanythingaboutthingslikepollution,rainforestsdisappearingandtheamountofwastewemake.Ithinkwecanalldosomethingtohelptheenvironmen

6、t.Forastartwecanrecycle.It’saprocessthat’seasytostartinourownhomes.优秀写作描写范例1共55个单词Theskywasblueandtherewereonlyafewclouds.Thebreezewascoolandcarriedthesmelloftheoceanonit.Asthetreesswayedandthesunshoneoverhead,theatmospherewasinterruptedbythepurrofacarc

7、omingdowntheroad.Thecarwasmovingonthesoftasphalt.Thefourboyslooked写作描写范例初稿分析2outofthecar.SurfBeachwasoftenpackedatthistimeofyearbuttodaywasSundayandeveryonehadspenttheweekswimmingandwasnowlyingonthissummerday.写作描写范例初稿分析2共91个单词Theskywasacrystalclearbluea

8、ndtherewereonlyafewpuffywhiteclouds.Thebreezewascoolandcarriedthesmelloftheoceanonit.Asthetreesswayedlazilyandthesunshonedirectlyoverhead,thequietatmospherewasinterruptedbythesteadypurrofacarcomingdowntheroad.Thecarpulleduponthea